Eminem lyrics you would change

[Amaranthine]

I'd change "who's the king of these rude ludicrous lucrative lyrics" to "who's the king of these LEWD ludicrous lucrative lyrics". Seems kinda obvious to me tbh, it's still a monosyllabic word and keeps the "oo" sound going, and it means essentially the same thing as rude, and it also adds another word to his alliteration string.

I still can't believe Em didn't write this.

[ashley94]

you better go to a fuckforum. and i am a she, ben je dom ofzo?

[ashley94]

things get worse, it just hurts my ears, it's so vulgar i can't listen to it, he swears in every song, if he didn't swear this much i would love him more.

What the fuck are you fucking doing here? This shithole is a fucking place for motherfuckers to fucking discuss that white motherfucking rapper who's fucking name is fucking Eminem. This motherfucker swears a fuckton, you must not fucking like anyfuckingthing he fucking puts out except for fucking Mockingbird and When I'm fucking Gone because he fucking only says fuck one fucking time.

Seriously, what kind of post was that to put in an Eminem forum? Should you be going to a Disney Channel forum?

you are at shady's forum and not your own, so don"t be retarded and shut the fuck up.

[CrashBand]

No Apologies wasn't recorded in 2005/06. It was recorded for The Eminem Show.

lmao this

[_Hawk_]

No Apologies wasn't recorded in 2005/06. It was recorded for The Eminem Show.

Proof? The last verse sounds as though it was made in 05/6. He performed the first two verses as freestyles back in 2002, however the third verse was never performed (I doubt it would work as a freestyle anyway).

It would appear that he was aiming to have the track made before-hand, but it was a question of everything coming together with a hook, a beat, and a final verse. There's a chance it was made beforehand, however this seems unlikely as it would have made it onto Encore.

[ArsheyHaq]

I'd add this extra line in the 'Weed Lacer Freestyle':
Told the nurse to save a bed for me I might be back, bitch/
only to repeat the process for a likely hat trick/

AND in 'Sing For The Moment'
It's like these kids hang on every single statement we make/
everythang that we say!/

Both pointless imo

You're pointless imo.

[SliK]

2003 Eminem was still a great writer (at least early 2003 I guess) and the song you are quoting from is great.

In fact, all his disses from that era are great.

Edit: No they're not actually, they started strong and got pregressively weaker.

[SliK]

Yeah the invasion mixtapes are what I'm talking about. Got some pretty shit songs on it.

But Bully and Go To Sleep are good. What did you think of Can-I-Bitch? I actually really enjoyed it. Not as a hard hitting diss, but it makes me laugh.

[SliK]

I wasn't sure when it was recorded but that makes sense; he stopped giving a fuck about Canibus after TES.

[Eminemeatinm&m]

I would change this damn line cuz fo sho its wrong:
Slaughterhouse in the house with the caucasian of rap... and Just Blaze on the track What the fuck is more amazing than that?

I know what, D12 in the house with Doctor Dre on the track.

[SliK]

lol

[sbolli1]

From I'm Back:

"Am I the only one who realizes they stink?"

I think instead it should be:

"Am I the only guy who realizes they stink?"

"Guy" helps keep up with the assonant "i" sound

[Mathers]

Eh...2002 Eminem was a great writer.

In 2003, his skills were starting to decline. His two Benzino disses (The Sauce and Nail in the Coffin) are the only two songs I can appreciate, lyrically.

But everything else was very average/lazy. "Monkey See Monkey Do" is terrible, and all the gangster songs from the Invasion mixtapes are lazily written and delivered.

What do you think of ''Bully''?

[UofLCard]

In 2003, his skills were starting to decline. His two Benzino disses (The Sauce and Nail in the Coffin) are the only two songs I can appreciate, lyrically.

But everything else was very average/lazy. "Monkey See Monkey Do" is terrible, and all the gangster songs from the Invasion mixtapes are lazily written and delivered.

What about Patiently Waiting?

[Blu]

From I'm Back:

"Am I the only one who realizes they stink?"

I think instead it should be:

"Am I the only guy who realizes they stink?"

"Guy" helps keep up with the assonant "i" sound

Not only that, but it'd also rhyme with "dye" in the next line.