
Devil'sAdvocate wrote:basically nobody agrees with class,again.
First of all, you're not teaching me anything. You're telling me that you prefer creative 2 syllable rhymes to average (creatively) 7 syllable rhymes. Cool. I don't because sonically and in structure-wise, the mutis in this song are impressive. I would go as far as saying that it is superior to the old BME records with the exception of Renegades and maybe Nuttin' To Do & Scary Movie. Rhyming wise, of course. I would W2H 3rd or 4th in BME's discography though.
So, listen again?...
List 10 TERRIBLE Eminem punchlines on Hell: The Sequel and 1 good punchline from the same album.
One Mic wrote:Devil'sAdvocate wrote:basically nobody agrees with class,again.
The guy is a complete fool, no one still takes him seriously do they?
Criteria to make class_theking's top rappers list
* White
* Small fanbase
* Rhyme pretentiously, even though you're not really saying anything worthwhile
* Can't have a single that has charted in the top 100
^ That is basically it.
One Mic wrote:Devil'sAdvocate wrote:basically nobody agrees with class,again.
The guy is a complete fool, no one still takes him seriously do they?
Criteria to make class_theking's top rappers list
* White
* Small fanbase
* Rhyme pretentiously, even though you're not really saying anything worthwhile
* Can't have a single that has charted in the top 100
^ That is basically it.
classthe_king wrote:[
there's too much at stake, and to find someone this raw on a beat is rare
Menzo wrote:classthe_king wrote:[Terrible:
Thunder and lightning, rain, hail, sleet with a tornado's the kind of brainstorm I get
there's too much at stake, and to find someone this raw on a beat is rare
David Carrideine jacking his penis in front of his tripod
Choking his own neck, what part you don't get?
I'm saying I die hard!
So you know if I hate fucking water sprinklers I don't love the hoes
tell Lady
Gaga she can quit her job at the post office
She's still a male lady!
Then I'm gonna put this shit in park like dog shit
It just feels like I'm so done with this shit I might as well wipe
But you better put a fork in it if you think I’mma lay here just spooning, yo
The ambush line
The accent/ax sent line
Bolded ones:
Not bad punchlines by any means, creative and funny. Yes, the stake/raw/rare line has been used somewhat before, but he proposes it well.
Italicized ones:
Nothing TOO creative, but hilarious, yes. You mad cuz you a Gaga fan![]()
Underlined ones:
Just whatever, not good or bad, just kinda...there
The rest:
Forgettable.
Devil'sAdvocate wrote:TBH Take From Me is the worst song on the EP IMO,his flow is choppy and very un-smooth,delivery is good,rhyming is okay,and i hate the subject.
while Welcome 2 Hell and Above The Law take the cake for me,Em won W2H while royce won Above the Law.
momentsgolden wrote:classthe_king wrote:[
there's too much at stake, and to find someone this raw on a beat is rare
To call that TERRIBLE is wrong class.
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classthe_king wrote:Well first of all, when did I say anything about 2 syllable rhymes...and yes, I prefer creative 3-4 syllable rhymes to average 7 syllable rhymes. Especially when he uses them in this flow, the rhymes may look better on paper but deffinitely not as good in the final product. I prefer these rhymes
This bitch wanted to blow me, I said, "It oughta happen.
You swallow cum bitch?" "No, but I brought a napkin"
Gettin skullie while I'm autographin
Got my daughter laughin cause I sent her mother whitewater raftin
over anything on Welcome 2 Hell.
I still here know energy or anger in his DELIVERY. You wanna here a good delivery, go look up Savage Classical Harpsichord
Terrible:
Thunder and lightning, rain, hail, sleet with a tornado's the kind of brainstorm I get
there's too much at stake, and to find someone this raw on a beat is rare
David Carrideine jacking his penis in front of his tripod
Choking his own neck, what part you don't get?
I'm saying I die hard!
So you know if I hate fucking water sprinklers I don't love the hoes
tell Lady
Gaga she can quit her job at the post office
She's still a male lady!
Then I'm gonna put this shit in park like dog shit
It just feels like I'm so done with this shit I might as well wipe
But you better put a fork in it if you think I’mma lay here just spooning, yo
The ambush line
The accent/ax sent line
Sorry, I can't find any good ones.
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