Solace wrote:I don't understand why fans cum all over that part. It's so stupid and that writing is awful. ^
because it's great story telling and he rhymes 15-16 syllables in a row throughout the most of it but that might not be it idk
Solace wrote:I don't understand why fans cum all over that part. It's so stupid and that writing is awful. ^
Solace wrote:I don't understand why fans cum all over that part. It's so stupid and that writing is awful. ^
Menzo wrote:Trimss wrote:I like same song and dance a lot more.
Same.
UnoDeuce wrote:Solace wrote:I don't understand why fans cum all over that part. It's so stupid and that writing is awful. ^
because it's great story telling and he rhymes 15-16 syllables in a row throughout the most of it but that might not be it idk
Solace wrote:UnoDeuce wrote:Solace wrote:I don't understand why fans cum all over that part. It's so stupid and that writing is awful. ^
because it's great story telling and he rhymes 15-16 syllables in a row throughout the most of it but that might not be it idk
The rhymes themselves are awful and simple, and hahaha if you think that's great story telling. Hard to believe people are impressed by shit like He's breaking me she lays and screams I'm crazy see the craze in me is painful gee I taste the cheek and...etc. She's scratchin' like some dumb freakdat similie from the GOAT
Here's some amazing rhymes as per that part on SWA
I take the gun and make her run, she's just a stupid cunt, see
He's crazy, son, he's breaking lungs, he turns them into lunch meat,
She's running fast, a cunning task, for her taste he has been hunting,
He's chasing now, don't make a sound 'cause he won't leave with nothing
The flow is cool but once he figures that out all he has to do is insert a lot of 2 syllable rhymes (taping, scraping, waking, making, patient, naked) and add a word at the end that rhymes with "glee" (taping me, scraping me, raping me, wakin me, biting me, fighting me, naked see, patient see). And then there's...Tummy, hungry, wants me, taunt me, asleep, front seat...Idk, it's a shame I can't see the greatness behind this.
But I'm sure arguing it on this site is a lost cause so I won't go any further. Just some quick thoughts. Eminem displays his use of multis all over Relapse in a much better fashion.
jinofthewind wrote:And Koolo's sources said... Nothing you idiots Koolo's sources are dead they're locked in my basement
Solace wrote:I don't understand why fans cum all over that part. It's so stupid and that writing is awful. ^
Elision wrote:i wonder if he spent more time writing relapse or mmlp2
relapse is so densely packed with intricate rhymes for days, but mmlp2 is just so smooth and cohesive lyrically, i wonder which is harder to do for him.
CrashBand wrote:You missed the "Dr./Dr." rhymes m8
mdemaz wrote:dam
Elision wrote:i wonder if he spent more time writing relapse or mmlp2
relapse is so densely packed with intricate rhymes for days, but mmlp2 is just so smooth and cohesive lyrically, i wonder which is harder to do for him.
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