My unyielding hate for LTWYL

[FreeSpeech]

Anyone with +1 year of writing rap lyrics can write lines like that.

Not from what I've seen from you all on here. Write something dope, go!

[BILI]

You are stupid,have zero knowledge about mixing,know nothing about rhyming.Therefore,your opinion is laughable

/your life

I can’t stop got it locked, kit and caboodle
Drop kicking a poodle
I’m a Rot and a lot sicker than you dudes
Chops dripping in voodoo
Pop sipping, got Scot Pippen
Hustle and hot spitting to groove to
Check this six syllable rhyming
Flex on Jay’s shit
The best kid kill, n grill till I’m diamond
I got gills can’t strand me on Gilligan’s island
Can’t get rid of me, level of skill real ill and still climbing

^BS lines I wrote a while ago for a freeverse, screwing around. No less than 6 syllables a line, if Em said those lines you'd be pissing your pants. I believe I do know how to rhyme, and those lines are garbage ones i have no problem giving to an internet forum.

I actually do know about mastering and mixing, I won't go into my entire background but to say I don't is nothing but incorrect.

Are you fucking serious?

[mdemaz]

I like pie. And you can die.
Sweet I got signed to CashMoney.

[BILI]

I like pie. And you can die.
Sweet I got signed to CashMoney.

Exactly

Good point mdemaz

[FreeSpeech]

I like pie. And you can die.
Sweet I got signed to CashMoney.

Exactly

Good point mdemaz

Explain the point made.

And try to write a verse with multis that match the one I gave.

[Unscarred]

FACK/Crack A Bottle/Big Weenie>LTWYL.

From now on your opinion is not valuable anymore, 'll know never to read any of them again

[FreeSpeech]

FACK/Crack A Bottle/Big Weenie>LTWYL.

From now on your opinion is not valuable anymore, 'll know never to read any of them again

You're from Bulgaria. I'll never read your opinion again as Bulgarians know nothing of hiphop.

[Master Chief]

Anyone with +1 year of writing rap lyrics can write lines like that.

Not from what I've seen from you all on here. Write something dope, go!

When did I post any of my raps in the CW section?

Here I go: (in 3 minutes).

Listen dawg, I'm dope as hell,
This is all, I've wrote to tell,
Kicking these sick wicked rhymes,
Gitting three chicks, thick and fine,
I am the evil teacher of mythical creatures,
I ridicule preachers cause I'm the biblical Jesus,
Rap, you blow at it while on mics I'm so savage,
I leave bones shattered like coke addicts, gone batshit,
I'm a cold basterd where's my soul's caskit?
I'm not done if I make a CD and the masses don't have it,

^ I can do that too roflcopter lololololo. No substance at all. It sucks balls because it's rhyming for the hell of it. If Eminem wanted to write like you and me he would make us look like fools.

[mdemaz]

Anyone with +1 year of writing rap lyrics can write lines like that.

Not from what I've seen from you all on here. Write something dope, go!

When did I post any of my raps in the CW section?

Here I go: (in 3 minutes).

Listen dawg, I'm dope as hell,
This is all, I've wrote to tell,
Kicking these sick wicked rhymes,
Gitting three chicks, thick and fine,
Rapping reaper, evil teacher of mythical creatures,
I ridicule preachers cause I'm the biblical Jesus,
Rap, you blow at it while on mics I'm so savage,
I leave bones shattered like coke addicts, gone batshit,
I'm a cold basterd where's my soul's caskit?
I'm not done if I make a CD and the masses don't have it,

^ I can do that too roflcopter lololololo. No substance at all. It sucks balls because it's rhyming for the hell of it. If Eminem wanted to write like you and me he would make us look like fools.

That was pretty good lol.

[BILI]

I like pie. And you can die.
Sweet I got signed to CashMoney.

Exactly

Good point mdemaz

Explain the point made.

And try to write a verse with multis that match the one I gave.

WTF son?Thats a CM type of verse,you get it now?Those multies are nothing to brag about,that drop has no meaning at all,I can put 6 syllables wit no meaning whenever you want,drop something with message,or at least wit some real lines that have dope punchlines and multies.

[mdemaz]

If we gotta player hate on something..Hate on CashMoney....Maybe except for Wayne...He's the least terrible.

[FreeSpeech]

Ahahaha I love how you all get sand in your vaginas the second I have an opinion you dont. I'm not gonna reply to that post by Amadeo as the Halo kid essentially wrote the exact same thing and doing all the split quotes is a pain. No, IDGAF about it being popular with lil girls and on the radio, other than the fact I have to hear it.

I said those songs are better than LTWYL because they have value to me. They are cheap entertainment, good for a few laughs. No shit LTWYL is a better lyrical meaningful song, that's not the point. It's not a good Eminem song. It may be good for someone else, but not Em.

I said this is legit the only studio album song of his I can't stand, is that so awful? Maybe I just don't like it.

As for everyone thinking they're funny saying I'm retarded and my opinion is now invalid, whoopdeedoo. I know for a fact I'm educated in rap/hiphop. I've legit studied it, not in the sense of "I listen to a lot of rap" but actually studied it. I'm a college marketing major, was once communications, I have had my writing nationally recognized. I study rap because I plan on working in the music industry (not making music), and already have ins with several fairly high level artists. I know my stuff basically.

I can see the appeal LTWYL has, but as an Eminem song, it sucks. So...

You can suck my dick if you don't like my shit, cuz I was right when I wrote this so suck...my dick!

[BILI]

And those Eminem quotes in every post are

[Satire]

I don't know why, but the Kanye avatar seems really appropriate on you right now, FreeSpeech...































































































































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[FreeSpeech]

And try to write a verse with multis that match the one I gave.

WTF son?Thats a CM type of verse,you get it now?Those multies are nothing to brag about,that drop has no meaning at all,I can put 6 syllables wit no meaning whenever you want,drop something with message,or at least wit some real lines that have dope punchlines and multies.[/quote]

They have no intrinsic meaning, but no CM artist drops 6+ syllable multis are you kidding me?
This verse is a throwaway for me because it's too close to Em's freeverse style. I have many verses with meaning, this isn't for that purpose. Em's swag juice freestyle is no better than this, it's the same bullshit rhyming to rhyme.

If you can do it, go. Write something that matches my verse.