Menzo wrote:the sick twisted alter ego raping and killing women
Those comedic first single songs
women and drugs
bringing back his roots
As you can see from your own quote, you have about 4 (or 5 if we include Beautiful and Careful emo) concepts that are being executed in one album. Variety is ok and i'm not saying anything is overly out of place... its just that you dont NEED to cover all those themes in one album. You dont NEED to follow that progression to come out of Relapse.
Aside- It reminds me of how stan had an awesome story line with 12 verses but he had to cut them down to 8 because it bogged down the song. It was better when it was more succinct. Further, I was watching T.i's interview of making Paper trail and how he
removed words from verses so that the pauses convey the message better. all that after reading this blog -
http://www.kidtwist.com/blog/let-me-be-clearThat is why i've always preferred SSAD to SWA. Clarity can get lost in the complexity of multies or (like in Relapse) an overly ambitious sequence when a little re-arrangement could make it shorter yet more palatable.