Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-post

[SliK]

I'm sure he was going for "sky and it's raining out" and just misaligned them like he always does.

So Fat is dope, my favourite on the album. The opening rhyme scheme is great ("c'mon man I'm crappin'").

[SliK]

Hahaha, it's an unreleased track from King Mathers..

[EminemInsider]

From "The Monster":

"Falling way back in the draft, turn nothing into something, still can
Make that, straw into gold chump, I will spin
Rumpelstiltskin in a haystack
Maybe I need a straight jacket, face facts"

This is a nice find.

[sbolli1]

From Baby:

pen is mightier than sword/finish writing than record

[Eedee]

I love this part of Desperation:

When she came up with a kick to the nuts twice, steel toe
Girl probably coulda put a 100-yard field goal through the uprights

[SliK]

Who walk around depressed and smoke a pound of cess a day
And yesterday went by so quick it feels like it was just today

(A)round depressed
Pound of cess

Also noticed 'yesterday' goes with the end rhyme scheme.

This should be:

"Who mope around depressed and smoke a pound of cess a day"

To make a 5 syllable multi (mope around depressed / smoke a pound of cess).

[ronnie56]

Loud Noises:

"You right back like a magnet on my dick grabbin' at my
Shit better get to the back of the line"

Thought it was only the four syllables like the rest of the scheme.

Do you think the "if" after line goes with it? Even though there's a pause it seems like it makes sense

magnet on my dick/grabbin at my shit/back of the line if

Yes. I thought I posted that but it turns out I'm more retarded than I remembered.

/dormerface

You wanna get your shot at me what kinda crap is that battle
What kind of rapper would I be-'fore I let another rapper think he's hot

[hellbound renegade]

I'm nuts, THEN AGAIN, who wants a plain EMINEM

[sbolli1]

From Survival:

"And if I don't got enough in the tank, maybe I can just siphon enough
To fill up this last can, man will I survive in this climate or what?"

[RKOunion]

From Headlights:

love you Debbie Mathers/fuck my deadbeat dad was

Longer than I thought at first.

[Mr Change]

I'm nuts, THEN AGAIN, who wants a plain EMINEM

I didn't notice this wow

From Headlights:

love you Debbie Mathers/fuck my deadbeat dad was

Longer than I thought at first.

That's what she said

[Amadeo]

From Headlights:

love you Debbie Mathers/fuck my deadbeat dad was

Longer than I thought at first.

Nice.

His A-to-B rhyme patterning in Bad Guy's 3rd verse is really cool. Extremely hard to do that while telling a story.

[Mr Change]

respect to technology/hecks all of these

So Far, great rhyme

[Amadeo]

I was thinking this the other day actually.

I assume you're talking about this part

Before hand
Hacked up a lung
Core plan
Back of a trunk
your fans

So cool.

Yeah, and:

Treat your bedroom window like I reached my full potential, I peeked/Continue to peep, still bent low then keep tappin the glass lightly then start to crescendo, then sneak

[sbolli1]

For As The World Turns:

"With one leg left, now I'm hoppin' around crippled
I grabbed my pocket knife and sliced off her right nipple"