EminemInsider wrote:Lose Yourself is his most complex rhyming ever.
Nollie wrote:Stay Wide Awake is garbage
Innovation wrote:I'm not sure about greatest ever, but Rock Bottom is one of the best you'll ever see.
I feel like I'm walking a tight rope, without a circus net
I'm popping percocets, I'm a nervous wreck
I deserve respect; but I work a sweat for this worthless check
Bout to burst this tech, at somebody to reverse this debt
Minimum wage got my adrenaline caged
Full of venom and rage
Especially when I'm engaged
And my daughter's down to her last diaper
That's got my ass hyper
I pray that god answers, maybe I'll ask nicer
Watching ballers while they flossing in their pathfinders
These overnight stars becoming autograph signers
We all long to blow up and leave the past behind us
Along with the small fry's and average half pinters
While player haters turn bitch like they have vaginas
Cause we see them dollar signs and let the cash blind us
Money will brainwash you and leave your ass mindless
Snakes slither in the grass spineless
Here's a challenge for you, highlight all of the multis. You'll realise just how good this verse is.
SWA has nothing on this.
Slim's Shady wrote:Innovation wrote:I'm not sure about greatest ever, but Rock Bottom is one of the best you'll ever see.
I feel like I'm walking a tight rope, without a circus net
I'm popping percocets, I'm a nervous wreck
I deserve respect; but I work a sweat for this worthless check
Bout to burst this tech, at somebody to reverse this debt
Minimum wage got my adrenaline caged
Full of venom and rage
Especially when I'm engaged
And my daughter's down to her last diaper
That's got my ass hyper
I pray that god answers, maybe I'll ask nicer
Watching ballers while they flossing in their pathfinders
These overnight stars becoming autograph signers
We all long to blow up and leave the past behind us
Along with the small fry's and average half pinters
While player haters turn bitch like they have vaginas
Cause we see them dollar signs and let the cash blind us
Money will brainwash you and leave your ass mindless
Snakes slither in the grass spineless
Here's a challenge for you, highlight all of the multis. You'll realise just how good this verse is.
SWA has nothing on this.
SWA has a lot on that lmao.
MikeNUFC wrote:Slim's Shady wrote:Innovation wrote:I'm not sure about greatest ever, but Rock Bottom is one of the best you'll ever see.
I feel like I'm walking a tight rope, without a circus net
I'm popping percocets, I'm a nervous wreck
I deserve respect; but I work a sweat for this worthless check
Bout to burst this tech, at somebody to reverse this debt
Minimum wage got my adrenaline caged
Full of venom and rage
Especially when I'm engaged
And my daughter's down to her last diaper
That's got my ass hyper
I pray that god answers, maybe I'll ask nicer
Watching ballers while they flossing in their pathfinders
These overnight stars becoming autograph signers
We all long to blow up and leave the past behind us
Along with the small fry's and average half pinters
While player haters turn bitch like they have vaginas
Cause we see them dollar signs and let the cash blind us
Money will brainwash you and leave your ass mindless
Snakes slither in the grass spineless
Here's a challenge for you, highlight all of the multis. You'll realise just how good this verse is.
SWA has nothing on this.
SWA has a lot on that lmao.
As much as I like SWA, it has absolutely fuck all on that Rock Bottom verse.
On SWA, he based the song soley on the multies and in turn loses some of his storytelling skills and adds some forced rhyming and lines.
Rock Bottom is written so incredibly that you could imagine the rhymes happened by accident because the vocabulary is so perfect. He's rhyming consistent 4 syllable multies without it sounded forced or the emotion being lost.
The fact people think SWA is better than this makes me feel quite sick.
I feel like I'm walking a tight rope, without a circus net
I'm popping percocets, I'm a nervous wreck
I deserve respect; but I work a sweat for this worthless check
Bout to burst this tech, at somebody to reverse this debt
Innovation wrote:@Slim's ShadyI feel like I'm walking a tight rope, without a circus net
I'm popping percocets, I'm a nervous wreck
I deserve respect; but I work a sweat for this worthless check
Bout to burst this tech, at somebody to reverse this debt
Nothing on SWA tops that. Think otherwise? Please do share. Those four lines are incredible. He has four syllable internal rhyming going on there.
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