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Love the Way You Lie

Postby TeamShady4Ever » Dec 30th, '10, 06:21

Hello! I just joined this board today, so I'm kind of nervous about doing this. My name is Shay and this is actually my first Eminem fan fiction story. I want to apologize beforehand if my Eminem character seems to be a little out of his "expected character", but in reality, no one knows how he really acts unless you really know him. Just a little bit of background information about me: I started off doing Michael Jackson fan fictions and I completed four. I am now currently working on a Janet Jackson story called "California Love", and I had the idea of attempting to depict Mr. Marshall Mathers in a story. It seems like it's going to be a bit of a challenge, but hey...that's the point of fiction :happy:. Right now, I'm only going to post the prologue and see how people react to it, and if I get enough positive reactions, I'm going to continue. If any of the mods feel as if this is in the wrong section, please feel free to move it where you deem it fit. So without further ado, I present to you...Love the Way You Lie.


Prologue

“So…who is she?”

“What are you talking about, baby?”

“Don’t play stupid with me! Who the f*ck is Jessica?!” I sighed, just ready for this conversation to end. “She’s nobody. I swear to you-”

“Liar! She called here, you know…and asked for you. And plus, you smell like her.” I puffed my cheeks. Busted.

“Baby, look. I’m sorry, okay? But don’t try and put this on me! You been f*cking around with other dudes too!” She rolled her eyes. “This isn’t about me. This is about you lying to me…in my face! You are such a great actor, Marshall. You’ve convinced me that you’re a lying, cheating bastard!” She made long angry strides towards me and before I knew it, her hand came hard across my face. She wasn’t gonna get away with that one.

I pushed her on the bed, making her yell more obscenities and held her down. She lunged a bare foot forward, kicking me in my stomach. “Ow! You b*tch!” Now angry, I pulled her up from the bed and slammed her against the wall and pinned her wrists above her head. We were both breathing heavily and glaring at each other for a good five minutes before I noticed her face softening. “M, why are we doing this? What are we doing?” I shrugged, still holding her wrists together. “I don’t know, girl…I just don’t know anymore.”

“Why did you lie to me?” I thought about lying again, but as I looked into those hazel eyes of hers that’ll make any man go out of his right mind, I made the decision that she didn’t deserve any more of my bullsh*t. “Rih, I…I don’t know.”

“I can’t do this anymore. We fight and argue everyday…I don’t need this.”

“So, what are you saying?” She sighed and directed her gaze towards the carpet. “I’m saying that me and you are not gonna work out. I’m all stressed out and whatnot because of you and your f*cking lies.” I slowly nodded and let go of her wrists. “You wanna go? Fine. Leave! Get the f*ck out of here!” She took her bottom lip between her teeth and made her way out of our room. I flopped down on my bed, belly up, and started to think. Think about how much our lives had changed in the past year. Many people don’t know the real reasoning behind the popular song that was making its way up the charts. They don’t know how much reality the hit song actually held. But we know…we knew that it was more than a song. We knew that it was life.
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Re: Love the Way You Lie

Postby Oby One » Dec 30th, '10, 15:28

... the fuck, son ?
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Re: Love the Way You Lie

Postby xxTrigger1989xx » Dec 30th, '10, 15:29

LOL this isn't a fan fiction website

inb4lock
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Came back to annihilate, the game's in dire straights, as I await
Word on Satan, as I drop, fall to my knees before this Quija board and I pray
Now I lay me down to sleep
I do this shit in my sleep, I’m sleepin' now, imagine if I awake


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Re: Love the Way You Lie

Postby Almostlity » Dec 30th, '10, 15:36

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Trimss wrote:> Alm goat
> Alm still goat

> Alm goat


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Re: Love the Way You Lie

Postby Oby One » Dec 30th, '10, 15:38

Almostlity wrote:Image


I lol'd.
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Re: Love the Way You Lie

Postby BawlTikki » Dec 30th, '10, 15:38

Fan factions are just corny.....

I'm sorry....
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Re: Love the Way You Lie

Postby ajthongbam » Dec 30th, '10, 15:44

Cant u guys be a little nicer? C'mon u guys are too mean.

You can post this in the Creative Writing section. CW is not all about rap.
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Re: Love the Way You Lie

Postby xxTrigger1989xx » Dec 30th, '10, 15:45

Love The Way You Lock, dR3 :laughing:

But really, it wasn't badly written, it's just...this is the wrong section for this, I'm sure there's a section for this?
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Re: Love the Way You Lie

Postby Rash J » Dec 30th, '10, 16:03

WTF wasn't expecting this.

Almostlity wrote:Image

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Re: Love the Way You Lie

Postby Eazy-GFX » Dec 30th, '10, 17:55

*Free post*

Almostlity wrote:Image

That shit never gets old. :laughing:
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Re: Love the Way You Lie

Postby xxTrigger1989xx » Dec 30th, '10, 17:57

Wow, this thread hasn't even been moved yet?

MOAR FR33 P05T5
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Word on Satan, as I drop, fall to my knees before this Quija board and I pray
Now I lay me down to sleep
I do this shit in my sleep, I’m sleepin' now, imagine if I awake


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Re: Love the Way You Lie

Postby TeamShady4Ever » Dec 31st, '10, 02:21

Well, if the mods approved my post, then apparently they think it's in the right section. So, before you try and charge me up, get your info right....it'll save you from looking like an ass :happy:
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Re: Love the Way You Lie

Postby Norway kills » Dec 31st, '10, 02:39

You're good at describing feelings, and feelings are the core of songs such as Love the Way You Lie - bravo! I really enjoyed the story, so ignore these other assholes and write some more. To sum it up: Cool story bro (pun intended).
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Re: Love the Way You Lie

Postby Master Chief » Dec 31st, '10, 02:39

Fucking women and their Love The Way You Lie fetish :facepalm
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Re: Love the Way You Lie

Postby EMINƎMShady95 » Dec 31st, '10, 02:48

Wrong section.

Free post :smoking:
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