My main point is something that has been said by Aone or Rev or EmBase, I don't remember which one.
I think The Monster was just a greedy attempt at profit after the LTWYL success. In my opinion, LTWYL is more genuine, from the quantity of bars Em did per verse to the fact that was a shot in the dark. Interscope couldn't be sure that the song would be a hit.
Then, in The Monster, Em made that formulaic 16 bars verse + hook + 16 bars verse + hook + 16 bars verse + hook thing. And we know that Em had a lot more to say when the 3rd verse was ending:
It's nothing, I'm still friends with the...
He HAD to finish the verse, stopping his stream of consciousness. And I don't like that in a rap artist, especially since Em on MMLP2 completely ignored that and was stacking bars on bars on bars in multiple songs.
2nd point: Besides the window pain pun, I do prefer Eminem's verses on LTWYL. His delivery was more sincere to me, and his lyrics/subject matter were dope too.
S/O to the member that made that comment. I agree with you.