Miller1121 wrote:classthe_king wrote:Ejaculate sperm....dick
Sperm whale....moby dick
We get it.... its just lame.
(No Im not saying that SH has never said a lame punchline)
It's really not lame though
Miller1121 wrote:classthe_king wrote:Ejaculate sperm....dick
Sperm whale....moby dick
We get it.... its just lame.
(No Im not saying that SH has never said a lame punchline)



classthe_king wrote:No, they are extremely original. If it's so easy why don't you replicate it right now?
I said two GOOD punchlines, plus RA's rhymes are much longer. It is extremely hard to put two good punchlines back to back with 4-5 syllable rhymes unless you are a creative rhymer. Look at this verse
I’m the right man for the hatchet job
Prepare the abattoir for the Lamb of God
Banish you to the land of nod
Close friends turn into snakes like Aaron’s Rod
Between a Ragnarok and a hard place
R.A to the last days, no matter what
Camelot home to my knighthood
Got Jakabok Botch locked inside my rhyme book
He rhymed a word like abattoir (which means Slaughterhouse) with a very common christian phrase with sacred land from the old testament with a magical staff from the brother of moses with a mythical tale in the Nordic religion with an anciet British Kingdom with a mythical demon. If that's not creative rhyming then I don't know what is.



I NEVER SAID THEY'RE STYLE DOESN'T TAKE TALENT, I SAID THEY'RE VERY UNORIGINAL WITH THEIR CONCEPTS AND CONTENT. THAT DOES NOT MEAN, I CAN REPLICATE THEM.
But, I could if I actually put my mind to it and actually tried. If you wanna see someone who can go look at VBV's writings.
OMG, are you fucking kidding me? Yes, that's fucking great.
But, structuring those lines like that has nothing to with rhyming. They might rhyme 4-5 syllables in between them but they could do the same if they spit one punchline in two lines.
My example:
You keep braggin' man, just shut the fuck up,
Or this rope will assure me, you punks is stuck up
^ 4 syllable rhymes with one punchline and one setup. YES, having two punchlines that rhyme 4 syllables is more impressive if executed well but you can rhyme as many syllables as you want even if you do the usual setup - punchline structure.



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Master Chief wrote:But, I could if I actually put my mind to it and actually tried..

classthe_king wrote:Satire wrote:Beautiful. Another personal classic I can tuck beneath Satire's belt.
Is it really your classic though...or is it my classic




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#anthem
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