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Left Alone 'a'Die

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Left Alone 'a'Die

Postby Xray » Sep 16th, '09, 17:43

Left Alone 'a'Die aka Left Alone To Die, I made this after hearing Dr. Dre - The Message. Got heavily inspired by piano beats and just had to attempt at making one. So check it out.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/656581309a136266/

Let me know what you think of it please.
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Re: Left Alone 'a'Die

Postby mcZu » Sep 16th, '09, 18:06

Only thing that sounds off to me is the difference between the piano tones and the instrument tones. Like the paino is to high compared to the other instruments. Besides that it sounds good, it's not repetitive and the patterns sound good.

I guess if you lay vocals on it it'll sound good.
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Re: Left Alone 'a'Die

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Sep 16th, '09, 18:23

piano is beautiful....right on
drum pattern seem pretty easy and repetive....so yeah some switch up wouldnt hurt
yeah all i actually gotta say to it
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Re: Left Alone 'a'Die

Postby Xray » Sep 17th, '09, 04:28

Thanks for checking it out bros, I forgot to mention that all this is like an intro till the actual verse region of the beat drops, musta forgot my bad. :sweating:
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Re: Left Alone 'a'Die

Postby Tornado » Sep 19th, '09, 16:33

I Love the kick in this, though the snare was weak. loving the different melodies enhancing the beat and i don't think ya'need to switch it up, not evry beat needs a different drum pat, just vocals
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