its defnly better than ur last attempt.
i'd try a violin with that dark shit man

2.5/5, lot of potential. drums are good, still lackin in melody. but improvement
Ice Killa wrote:listenin now...
its defnly better than ur last attempt.
i'd try a violin with that dark shit manbetter than last time tho, and i like the 2nd melody. needs cleanin up. but the drums are pretty good.
2.5/5, lot of potential. drums are good, still lackin in melody. but improvement
le tunisien wrote:Xray wrote:0:10 remove that sound that comes in. It's disgusting. The main sample is the shit. Its good but mixing needs working, and those sounds that come in after 0:10 through out the rest of the beat are retarded remove them urgently. I love that sample, did you cut it though? lol.
ok i will remove that sound and will try to add somethin dark![]()
editk did what u told me to do, tell me what u think http://www.zshare.net/audio/572904995487ac39/
Xray wrote:le tunisien wrote:Xray wrote:0:10 remove that sound that comes in. It's disgusting. The main sample is the shit. Its good but mixing needs working, and those sounds that come in after 0:10 through out the rest of the beat are retarded remove them urgently. I love that sample, did you cut it though? lol.
ok i will remove that sound and will try to add somethin dark![]()
editk did what u told me to do, tell me what u think http://www.zshare.net/audio/572904995487ac39/
Dude you added another sound -_- remove that shit. keep it the normal sample and the drums ONLY. -_-
Tash8 wrote:^ the mixing on that isn't that great...
the new melody is ok but it makes it too filled up
BizarreKId wrote:Tash8 wrote:^ the mixing on that isn't that great...
the new melody is ok but it makes it too filled up
yeah i know right, cause no1 makes good beats but u...
Tash8 wrote:BizarreKId wrote:Tash8 wrote:^ the mixing on that isn't that great...
the new melody is ok but it makes it too filled up
yeah i know right, cause no1 makes good beats but u...
wow... blow me asshole.. if you can't take critique then don't produce...
dumbfuck.
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