it reminds me of my first beat.
i was glad i figured out how to use the program (which wasnt true)
I thought every rapper would bump my shit, but they didnt.
Kinda similar to this. You're beat isn't really a 'rapable' beat. there are some instruments and there is vaguely a melody in it. There's no good bassline. Kick and snares are chosen pretty random.
Just keep making beats and keep posting them. You will improve your skills. It took me years to do what i do now and thats not even superb.
So let this be a motivation to keep practicing.

And listen to other beats on this forum and read comments on them. You will learn from that.