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TiBon vs Spyder(Spyder Won)

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TiBon vs Spyder(Spyder Won)

Postby TiBon » Jan 25th, '10, 18:26

I'm battlin' you "the king", a red small stinkin' spyder
you've been infected with syphilis and now your pussy is wider

Your dad rides cocks, your momma is on crack,
your sister is a biatch, your MC style is wack

I feel no remorse for dissin' you like Escobar
you should start playin' the guitar, you really look like Everlast

You suck motherfucka, reach your "Final Destination"
your shit is weak cause you lack of inspiration

First rap battle, so don't critisize me hard. Spyder, your turn :p
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Re: TiBon vs Spyder

Postby Spyder » Jan 25th, '10, 19:07

lyrical drop-kick to stop-tricks thinkin he hot-shit
flipped and ripped "Ti" for thinking that hes got-"it".

obnoxious,my shit stabs in stomach like abdomen crunches
on some "karate kid" spit but still lacks the rappin punches.

leave this stan murdered and beaten so go on and flee-home
my style sideswipes yours so im leavin your mic "T-Boned".

taking your rap virginity, the last masked enemy you sent-for-me
my style expensive see, you cant afford a loss when you step-to-me

bar 1 - Ti in his name flipped is IT
bar 2 - Tibon is a karate school
bar 3 - a T-bone is when you crash into someones side



sorry it wasnt that great i forgot about this haha :(
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Re: TiBon vs Spyder(Vote)

Postby Strictt Ame » Jan 25th, '10, 19:27

(3) Punchlines- Spyder
(3) Personals- Spyder (nameplay)
(2) Multies- Spyder
(1) Flow- Spyder
(1) Structure- Tie
(1) Vocab/Complex- Spyder
(1) Other- Spyder

Pretty much a whitewash, Ive seen better from you Spyder, but it was enough to get the job done..Bon work on setting up and following thru on your punch attempts, alot of your verse was just random thoughts that rhymed..focus on making sense with each couplet and that will help your verse have some sort of power behind it..
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Re: TiBon vs Spyder(Vote)

Postby shadyfreakzul » Jan 25th, '10, 20:14

(3) Punchlines- Spyder
(3) Personals- Spyder
(2) Multies- Spyder
(1) Flow- Spyder
(1) Structure- Spyder
(1) Vocab/Complex- Spyder
(1) Other- Spyder

onesided battle.loved the nameplay by spyder.
I'm strong, my word is Bond like James
Niggaz be tryin to test, but they 'week' like seven days-Canibus

I don't belong here,my dad fucked my mom in the wrong year.-Budden

like taekwondo you lack punches-Shadyfreakzul

Around here i am the Goat like the Capricorn.-Wale
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Re: TiBon vs Spyder(Vote)

Postby Spyder » Jan 25th, '10, 22:36

i know i let you down strictt :(

thanks guys 2-0


tibon keep with it man ull get there :y:
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Re: TiBon vs Spyder(Vote)

Postby TheKanza » Jan 26th, '10, 22:02

shadyfreakzul wrote:(3) Punchlines- Spyder
(3) Personals- Spyder
(2) Multies- Spyder
(1) Flow- Spyder
(1) Structure- Spyder
(1) Vocab/Complex- Spyder
(1) Other- Spyder

onesided battle.loved the nameplay by spyder.



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Re: TiBon vs Spyder(VOTE OR DIE)

Postby Spyder » Jan 26th, '10, 22:29

ight 3-0 KO
good battle Ti stay wit it :y:
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