TJB vs. SMITHY(Open)

[tjb]

im gonna trash u like garbage, i go hard with no armor
take bites out of you like a shark, words that naw both of your arms off
watch the shadows an the dark, go in an you wont go none farther
slaughter your whole family, start with father an end with daughter
breaking news the next day, news mark me a hero, an undying martyr
should of stopped you at zero, like you an album, the carta
the sad part is truly, im only getting started
but i can say im finished, cuz your shit man, strait retarded

[Element.]

Alryt man just seen this and i will post ina few mins

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[gutawafang]

(3) Punchlines - Smith
(3) Personals - Smith
(2) Multies - TJB
(1) Flow - Smith
(1) Structure - TJB
(1) Vocab/Complex - Smith
(1) Other - NIL

8-3

I vote Smithy.

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Thanks for the vote
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Bump.....

[Spyder]

srry i had voted but my comp locked up so here it is

3 punches - Tie(no good ones)
3 personals - None(unless im mistaken)
2 multies - None
1 flow - TJB
1 structure - TJB
1 Vocab/Complex - None
1 Other - None

not a good battle at all, saying things like fat flaps isnt a hard punch gotta throw in personals to make it to your oppenent. increase multies and ad some wordplay for complexity

TJB gets it 2-0