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Sox vs Innovaton( Tourny battle 3)

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Sox vs Innovaton( Tourny battle 3)

Postby Spyder » May 20th, '11, 01:10

Innovation
There's being an Eminem fan and straight feminem man,
Repping Slim's "sox" is a place I've never been, damn,*
After this you'll be left more pissed off than Robot,**
I'll be waiting for the post - "Innovation won, so what?"***
How can you be a battler if none of your punches hurt,****
Just put this dude on a plate and suddenly lunch is served,
"Innovation was more innovative", you'll be repeating it,*****
This is your first tourney, and you ain't defeating shit!

* Wordplay. "Sox" - socks, I don't rep him (slimsoxshady)/It's pretty feminine for him to rep Eminem's socks.
** viewtopic.php?f=26&t=92397 check Robot's post
*** another play on his battle with Robot.
**** fighter/battler
***** he votes for me before and said that


SlimSoxShady
I'm strapped-up with gats-tucked so you know I'm going "Inn"-for-the-kill
My guns "drawn" - Animation Domination invasion and I'm King-of-the-Hill
I found-me some ground-beef, "Come across my lines" - get dropped in another county
Pull 'nn "I" out during this rhyme clout so you can watch the "ovation" when they crown-me
You're not a liar you're On Fire cuz you're getting "lit up" - I got the right fluid
Call me Pacquiao, you "can't see me" cuz these "punches" got your eyesight-ruined
Come hike-to-it , you may be the Innovation but I have control-of-the-market
Back Down now, you couldn't take "sox(socks) off" unless I sold-you-a-carpet


line 2: drawn-->animation. Animation Domination is the Sunday FOX line up that used to include King of the Hill
line 3: verse lines and county lines wordplay
line 4: nn=an...."I"=eye. Innovation without nn+I is spelled "ovation"
line 5: his sig has On Fire lyrics...fluid=flow
line 8: his sig has Won't Back Down
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Re: Sox vs Innovaton( Tourny battle 3)

Postby Spyder » May 20th, '11, 01:12

Sox gets every category sept maybe structure, no need to break it down

sox loved the nameplay punch


Inn- gotta use more complex rhymes/multies/vocab
deeper harder punches/personals

thins isnt his first tourney so gotta come with facts

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Re: Sox vs Innovaton( Tourny battle 3)

Postby Spyder » May 20th, '11, 01:24

Geno wrote:It was over after

I'm strapped-up with gats-tucked so you know I'm going "Inn"-for-the-kill
My guns "drawn" - Animation Domination invasion and I'm King-of-the-Hill

tbh

imo

tbh

:smoking:

But I'm not a judge.


for this battle perhaps, later on in the rounds against Yah, Maybe, No Way Out...
wont get it done

p.s. i noticed that says Yah Maybe No hahaah :sweating:
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Re: Sox vs Innovaton( Tourny battle 3)

Postby slimsoxshady » May 20th, '11, 02:07

Spyder wrote:
Geno wrote:It was over after

I'm strapped-up with gats-tucked so you know I'm going "Inn"-for-the-kill
My guns "drawn" - Animation Domination invasion and I'm King-of-the-Hill

tbh

imo

tbh

:smoking:

But I'm not a judge.


for this battle perhaps, later on in the rounds against Yah, Maybe, No Way Out...
wont get it done

p.s. i noticed that says Yah Maybe No hahaah :sweating:

is No Way Out, Relapse.LP by any chance?
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Re: Sox vs Innovaton( Tourny battle 3)

Postby No Way Out » May 20th, '11, 02:21

slimsoxshady wrote:
Spyder wrote:
Geno wrote:It was over after

I'm strapped-up with gats-tucked so you know I'm going "Inn"-for-the-kill
My guns "drawn" - Animation Domination invasion and I'm King-of-the-Hill

tbh

imo

tbh

:smoking:

But I'm not a judge.


for this battle perhaps, later on in the rounds against Yah, Maybe, No Way Out...
wont get it done

p.s. i noticed that says Yah Maybe No hahaah :sweating:

is No Way Out, Relapse.LP by any chance?



Nawwwwwwwwhh. Yah hah told me about this site. Im just trying to gain exposure before i record my mixtape

PS ; Ya'lll can loook out for a new song this week.


Also, i'll be seeing one of you guys next round. Nice batttle felllas
Maybe wrote:This is pretty damn good. For what it is, a simple, smooth flowing punch-line verse, it's perfect. You didn't miss a single rhyme, and the content was amusing. Good stuff man, really good.

10/10

C.R.E.A.M wrote:I thought that dude is all about trash talk and he's gonna leave the tourney in the first round.. but that was actually dangerous. :sweating:

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Re: Sox vs Innovaton( Tourny battle 3)

Postby Spyder » May 20th, '11, 02:56

nah that aint coles style
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Re: Sox vs Innovaton( Tourny battle 3)

Postby ThomasAguanis » May 20th, '11, 04:51

(3) Punchlines- SlimSoxShady- way more creative punches.
(3) Personals- SlimSoxShady- the nameplay and use of what was in Innovation's signature did it.
(2) Multies-SlimSoxShady- clearly had better multis.
(1) Flow- Innovation- It was way easier to flow, but not nearly as complex.
(1) Structure - Tie- Both had lines that lined up well. I really don't think this should even be a category, maybe we can get rid of it in the 2nd round?
(1) Vocab/Complex-SlimSoxShady- this is clear.
(1) Other- Vintageness Factor- SlimSoxShady- style is somewhat V-Dogg/J-Roc-ish.

11-2 SlimSoxShady

SlimSoxShady- Great verse. Not much I can say here. You know what you're doing. Some of your lines seem a bit long and hard to flow properly, but that seems to always happen with the style you write in (I've seen others use similar styles and have the same issue). This really isn't a big issue, because you dominate in every other voting category. Keep doing your thing. :y:

Innovation- Pretty good verse. You have a grasp on multis and an alright flow, but are lacking in other skill sets. You need to work on developing punches better and maybe lengthening your lines a bit. Not that they were too short, but I think you could have extended them a bit more. Not sure what other advice I can give you, but if you need anything else explained, feel free to ask. Keep battling and you'll improve in time. By the way, your "sox" line was very clever. :y:
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Re: Sox vs Innovaton( Tourny battle 3)

Postby Spyder » May 20th, '11, 05:20

sox takes it two nothin ko
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