(3) Punchlines- Master Chief- The Viper name flip was great, as was the Liar & A thief line. These are somewhat personal, but I'm classifying them more as punches.
(3) Personals- Venom- the Halo and diction references did it.
(2) Multies- Venom
(1) Flow- Master Chief- I felt his flowed more smoothly than Venom's.
(1) Structure- Master Chief- his was more consistent.
(1) Vocab/Complex- Venom- the Zodiac Killer line did it. That was very clever.
(1) Other- Assonance/Slant Rhymes- Tie- This is a hard thing to accomplish, but both verses had a few instances of this.
7-6 VenomVenom- Great verse. I felt a bit of it didn't flow properly, but it was pretty smooth throughout. The first line was very cleverly worked out. I also liked the "put Master Chief in a box" line a lot too. Your personals were on point as well. I was impressed that you gave the illusion of certain things rhyming when they technically didn't. This is a hard thing to do, I know first hand. I also think your breakdown was way too long, but that didn't take away from the verse. You seem to have a grasp of all skills required in a battle, but may have to step your game up a little in future rounds. Keep doing your thing.
Master Chief- Great verse. This battle was extremely close. If you had a few more multis worked in, I think you would have taken this battle. Your punches/personals were dope and the Viper/RA/Diabolic references were extremely clever. You also had a few instances of making things rhyme that technically didn't (I just don't want to call it assonance) and that is very impressive. You're lack of a break down didn't take away from your verse. I thought everything was pretty obvious (unless I missed something?). You also seem to have a grasp of all skills required in a battle. Keep doing your thing.
