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Postby Suppa » Sep 10th, '06, 15:03

Sup playas , I need to score these 100 posts fast to get those instruemntals . well if y'all got some ryhmes to show , show 'em here
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Postby Suppa » Sep 10th, '06, 15:06

Let him press install after all he lacks in all
Uploads that tell how to act not to accept the false
I'll barge in so fast the fresh behind the door
'll make a 1-80 turn along it and smash the wall
I'll get at you faster than a gat revolved
Press like hydro-pressure under Niagra Falls
Sneaky enough to pass the guards
Unpack the vault, pack the bags wihout lead assault
Like a precise forensic who lives a thug life
And switches between three different blood types
Daily, create these programmes to trace me
Plus I'm emotionless like no man embraced me
El Jay probably needs both hands to weight lift
My microphone that blows when it takes hits
To get a responce like a fontal bomb threat
Force the society to follow once I'm on track
I got no tattoo drawings on my arms yet
Trace you faster than a turned on alarm set
Let him approach and I might whoop his ass
Launch at songs on and on like loops and laps.
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Postby Suppa » Sep 10th, '06, 15:08

anyways this verse 'll probably be on my mix tape but I'll share anyways, like I give a fuck about copycattin ;)
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Postby king_mc » Sep 11th, '06, 00:23

yo man a "bar" is 2 lines. i mean it may b diffrent from yall r from but i alwayz wuz told it wuz 2 lines
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Postby katastrophe » Sep 11th, '06, 00:39

king_mc wrote:yo man a "bar" is 2 lines. i mean it may b diffrent from yall r from but i alwayz wuz told it wuz 2 lines


yea, it is 2 lines
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Postby Suppa » Sep 11th, '06, 14:56

haha , i always had a bar for one line, I'm probably wrong since your explanation makes more sense but fuck it like rappas give a fuck anyways, stay cool
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Postby Suppa » Sep 11th, '06, 15:00

what y'all think bout this '2 bar' verse

Look at'im lost somewhere on tha VERGE of a BREAKDOWN
He in DEEP yet so FRESH actin ABSURD fo' DAYS NOW
He WEAK yet he ACTS like on a SEARCH fo' GREAT NOUNS
So he can SPEAK better yet RAP give BIRTH to J-TOWN
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Postby Suppa » Sep 11th, '06, 15:01

to give BIRTH to J-TOWN *
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