battle

[mad dogg]

ayooooo

while you stand there and bob on ya boyfriends dick//ima stand here reppin my click//im the packin heat//makin hit beats//unlike you,you desprate so you sit at home and beatcha meat//you gonna try n steal one by cheatin//you like eddie gurerro//but ill still have you jacked up,fucked up,whille im ridin my comerro//im like the pharoh of egypt//when you come meat me shake my hand ima say hey you must be reppin blue//cuz im takin you out like a crip//ima be poppin you my clip//but your words are slippin//unlike me im on thses streets pimpin//playin my songs and tippin//
oyu at the feet of me//its like hell up in here im heatin you//cant help myself but im beatin you//and afta this you gonna be my bitch and ima be keepin you//

[mad dogg]

iight thomas when eva man

[ThomasAguanis]

iight thomas when eva man

ill do mine tonight. i gotta go back to work soon.

and just making your verse easier to read:

ayooooo

while you stand there and bob on ya boyfriends dick//
ima stand here reppin my click//
im the packin heat//makin hit beats//
unlike you,you desprate so you sit at home and beatcha meat//
you gonna try n steal one by cheatin//
you like eddie gurerro//
but ill still have you jacked up,fucked up,whille im ridin my comerro//
im like the pharoh of egypt//
when you come meat me shake my hand ima say hey you must be reppin blue//
cuz im takin you out like a crip//
ima be poppin you my clip//
but your words are slippin//
unlike me im on thses streets pimpin//playin my songs and tippin//
oyu at the feet of me//
its like hell up in here im heatin you//
cant help myself but im beatin you//
and afta this you gonna be my bitch and ima be keepin you//

umm yea..i have no idea how the hell you wrote that or what structure you used so made it that way...line by line..eh it works for me

[ThomasAguanis]

you

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

tom

[stevethetruth]

tom you killed him

[ThomasAguanis]

thanks for the votes guys

4-0 me so far

[polluted]

lol
this bitc dogg ent worth dime n cant rap fa shit, fake Gs
motherfucker


vote: TOms streets 'head

[DOPE]

great shit Tom

n ive read battles at rapbattles.com they are sick as hell,, this dude is obiviously lying

[Suppa]

My struglin makes me reflect the hardest work
Not in any article despite these bars I wrote
I could spark n' glow like these stars in gold
But this sound proof shield still guards my flow
I'm stressed out, in need of a Harpsi's chord
Take Pacs place where the most workin artists stored
But I'm still fake for you, take a few,
Strays, this time not wake-up and get wasted too
Rappers try to stomp like a dinosourus
With lines as bored as the ones behind the chorus
If copycatted rhymes were in my own rap
I couldn't sleep and probably drown in my own sweat
Too much pride to ask for the key to the studio
Impressed by the Tics on the St. Louis flow
Not gifted but somehow still came through it though
Now my shit is as crazy as a J-Lewis show! So fuck you!

[Suppa]

One verse that I wrote a couple of months ago, for y'all brothas

[Inches]

you are a bitch
go watch the movie hitch
your hair smells like poo
cows with spots say moo
speakin of poo i gotta use the loo
or should i say the john
where i mow my front lawn



haha this purposley sucks just so you know lol

[Asa Baugh]

Look at me acting like I get around
Bama luv 2 my tru thugz picture me now
i'm down for dat Skyline Sound looking for pay day
no longer no way because i got paid
try 2 fuck wit me punk trick what a dumb move
cross Asa Baugh now who you gonna run 2
i'm just da liberal literal rip it cool typical man
bustin shit all da time wit dis lyrical brand
it's a miracle that i rip it cool when i'm lyrical
when i hit the literal critical mass
fell da wrath of da south when i'm bustin ya ass
all da men hate me want 2 be me so they dis me
all the gurlz luv me be with me so they kiss me
in skyline all da honeyz try 2 blind us
commiting street crime on da block is where you find us

[ThomasAguanis]

ok so umm can someone explain why people are posting randomass verses in my old battle?

[Inches]

ok so umm can someone explain why people are posting randomass verses in my old battle?

nope lol