Random But Interesting & True

[MoBrat]

i didnt write this to get a response but i thought it was interesting + true so im sharing it with yall-->Mabey i'll catch a beat something that'll get me off my feet i wont let this freestyle defeat i will complete it with something concrete music is my heaven retreat shes so sweet but she keeps telling me to eat i dont care if i repeat yall want street cred me i'd rather stay in bed i stand on 1 thread instead of looking ahead i look 4 the past dont care if im last cross the line she says everythings fine but its not she says it a lot she got caught lying inside shes crying u gotta keep trying 2 get thorugh ask them its true they leave u a clue u just dont know what 2 do theres few that'll tell u there point of view they want a thank u here n there all u do is sit there and stare so this is my song to make men aware i dont wanna be a millionaire thats rare u get so drunk drinking beer u dont even see her tear everyone has a fear of their spouse wanting 2 disappear u'll get it once a year

[-[Zach]-]

really poetic

[MoBrat]

ya thats cause i felt like crap cause my sister passed sept 21 and i started writing more often then i wrote that and decied to share it with all u good ppl

[C-Game]

nice stuff man
and god bless ur sister

[Shady's_Back]

Very cool man, sorry about your sister.

[-[Zach]-]

God bless ur sis

[MoBrat]

thank u all its good 2 know that there is good ppl in the world still i was hating on the world since mo passed but now i relalize there is kool ppl out there

[C-Game]

yea bro
and mind you that ur sister is still with ya

[Inches]

yea bro
and mind you that ur sister is still with ya

amen to dat

but yo
work on your structure