LW: Wordskill VS Public Enemy (CLOSED)

[Kez]

Post count 30 + AND
Registered on or before December 25th 2006
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FLOW
STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

4 votes to win
3-0 KO

Wordskill:
Sick as AN-THRAX* when I PLAN-RAPS to "Bring The Noise"** to PUB-LIC ENEMY,
With flowin' GOLDEN RHYMES to BLOW HIS MIND like Oswald DONE-TA-KENNEDY***

I`ll turn this public enemy into a private dancer**** in this RHYME A-RENA,
My MAG-I-CAL LINES'll BLACK-EN-HIS EYES, just like an IKE TA-TINA,

I`m SLICIN' PIZZA, cos this guys rhymes are over-LOADED WITH CHEESE,
I`m POSTIN DIS-EASE, WORDSKILL's VERSE-WILL leave the VOTERS WITH EASE!

Public Enemy:
Yo wordskill the only skill you got is sit and watch
Sit in front of the toilet and url,
You ain't strong, you as little as a girl when i am finished
Wordskill, you say it your self, Kill? Who know one, nihil
Youre ill, urling and waiting
You should had called youre self wordill

Edit : again trimmed down and accepted da first 6

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

again that guy got far too many lines

[Rae]

ok i was gonna do it this way ... read public enemy's and judge it on just 6lines ... and on all the lines ... but then i read it ... and compared it to Wordskill's ... i was like ok ...

Wordskills had better flow, it rhymed better (in my opinion) and it kept me interested when i was reading it.

Public Enemy's was ok , i was bored when i read it, i really didnt like it at all.

I vote for Wordskill

(and cgame ... i dunno who either of these ppl are ... so thats y i voted)

[C-Game]

DAMN

shit ill edit again

only first 6 lines

[C-Game]

well raes vote is accepted coz she judged on 6 lines

1-0 up WORDSKILL


p.s i deleted all da other replies on da topic.....sorry coz i only wanted votin in here...

TY

[D@vid]

wordskill

better flow and it actually rhymed

[MoBrat]

i vote 4 wordskill cause his rhymed, he had way better punches and he had more multies

[D@vid]

3-0 wordskill


voting should stop now

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

yeh voting closed