Liyah VS Bar (battle from rapgodfathers)

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Liyah

The Barz u spittin out ...is in yo bagpipe son,
plus wearing a kilt ...man that shyt sounds like fun,
the structure of flowin' , i be the "Loch " to that "Ness",
fluid like H2O, pure nice and entrique'n finess,
i give you a funeral dawg , it's gonna be beautiful,
and why ya'll scottish men got such huge cuticles ?

DAMN .....

abstract , when i react, as a matter of fact, u finished,
in tact , wit no setbacks, like a batter wit a bat, is business

Like the homie the clown imma take you down, wit no 12 rounds attached,
this kat , aint profound , that he'll probably get confused , and say where ya diss be at ? ,
this dude aint gonna get known , he tryin' to back lady soverign,
only in history it's known , that they have funny lookin' scottish men,
hell hath no fury dude , it's serious right here no fear,
just take a good look at this dude right here ......

Bar

let me spit about the scottish fire like a hottish tyre, never tire,
you should retire, you nothing but the fat kid at the back of a chior,
now the desire you require to acquire my skill is like barbed wire it kill,
you should just chill not one of your lines thril while my ryhme spill like water,
we scots ill, we willl slaughter your duaghter come back and say we caught-her
brought-her fought-her and shot-her, send you the pic of a morge can you spot-her
i said i wouldnt feed but that stunt theres no need, theyll probly look at the pic and not read,
im a smoke you like weed and laugh while you bleed i dont mislead i just exceed you indeed,

we should spit this on two verses or just versus again,
coz without the scots thing you verse was plain,
i read that about twenty times a scot punchline with no rhyme,
the scots thing is sublime you can only use is once else you a mime,

i aint got no funny pic but you aint funny chick let me say this quick
your verse was funny shit, but the punch for me couldnt find it


couple of things...how may votes for a winner ? ( i aint checked house rules yet) also after this battle we goni battle again no matter the outcome...coz every place i bttle they use the scottish shit once then it cant get used again...to me your verse was recycled shiti hear a million times already but its like that on most forum or anywere i battle lol

anywae good luck n no beef or shit all for fun


edit:

if any of ya'll say about feeding, i didnt fip any of the punches or ryhmes just commented on the pic and shit

yup i got pwned with the pic and shit i know

anywae no votes have been on this yet so ya'll welcome to vote :sweating


edit: if a mod could make them quote itd be great it aint working for me

edit: request obliged

[D@vid]

both were brilliant if u ask me. nice pic too.its too hard to pic one of u.u both had good multies and flow. one of the better battles i've seen anywhere.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

both were brilliant if u ask me. nice pic too.its too hard to pic one of u.u both had good multies and flow. one of the better battles i've seen anywhere.

thx lol i actually laughed like fuck mysel when i read her verse and then seen the pic

[D@vid]

both were brilliant if u ask me. nice pic too.its too hard to pic one of u.u both had good multies and flow. one of the better battles i've seen anywhere.

thx lol i actually laughed like fuck mysel when i read her verse and then seen the pic

its always fun to make fun of ur own culture.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

im winning 1-0 on the other site

[MoBrat]

congrats...i would've voted 4 u on this 1 even tho that pic added so much more 2 the other 1 i liked ur's better

[4D]

I hate people who post pics in a text battle, I was on another site and some people used to do that, to others. It's funny, but is an unfair advantage, and distracts from the rhymes.

Anyway, I think you won this on rhyming skills alone Bar.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

thx guys the sites voting is DAM SLOW!!!! they on like a come down from everyone being at each others throats were i walk in "hello i do text battles" no i got 3 battles goin there unfinished coz they all see me as fresh challenge ( i call it fresh meat ) lol