LW: Verb-ill VS Subzero (CLOSED )

[Kez]

Post count 30 + AND
Registered on or before December 25th 2006
Simple votes like I vote X is not accpeted
must give a brief description on why u voted him OR/AND
vote on ALL/ SOME of these categories

FLOW
STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

4 votes to win
3-0 KO

Verb-ill:
You will be filled, killed and locked up and jailed
When you got home youre mom got nailed
And not by me but by the pro
The one who don't need ammo, so lets go
I ll beat you hand by hand so don't be lame
This is just a game, but you won't get the fame


p.s Edited and accepted only first 6 lines

Subzero:
you cant hack my tactics, i bring the drama like theatrics
i got crazy an-tics, you a man-bitch, wit a pussy and man-tits

i leave this cat in fits, verb-ill's verse lookin' like a motherfuckin' word spill
i keep shit trill, the last real action hero, its subzero, more gangster than de niro

my rhymes are on a whole different level, you a fake rebel
you got no chance, you on the dance floor and i'm the devil

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

yeh that look like 6 lines

[MoBrat]

ok im only voting on verb-ill's first 6 lines

FLOW -- verb-ill
STRUCTURE -- sub-zero
PUNCHES -- sub-zero
MULTIES -- sub-zero
RHYMES -- sub-zero
VOCAB -- sub-zero
COMPLEXITY -- sub-zero
NAMEPLAY -- sub-zero
OTHER(enjoyment, creativity) -- sub-zero

OVERALL -- 8-1 sub-zero

Verb-ill ur lines sucked cause ur first 6 lines weren't the best + u did way more then 6 lines

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

ok im only voting on verb-ill's first 6 lines

FLOW -- verb-ill
STRUCTURE -- sub-zero
PUNCHES -- sub-zero
MULTIES -- sub-zero
RHYMES -- sub-zero
VOCAB -- sub-zero
COMPLEXITY -- sub-zero
NAMEPLAY -- sub-zero
OTHER(enjoyment, creativity) -- sub-zero

OVERALL -- 8-1 sub-zero

Verb-ill ur lines sucked cause ur first 6 lines weren't the best + u did way more then 6 lines

your vote dont count man sorry


keep this voting closed till we get a hold of the guy

[C-Game]

whoa 6 lines only

imma delete da rest now
.....

only da first 6 lines are accepted

SO VOTE NOW!!!!

[C-Game]

bar bro lets accept da vote coz its not justified to sub0 for not gettin dat vote since mobrat judged on first 6 lines....

i totally stand by ur decision if mobrat had taken all of the lines under account anyway

Subzero is 1-0 up

[D@vid]

subzero

better flow, multies, more complex

[C-Game]

sub0 2 - 0 up

[4D]

Verb-ill:
You will be filled, killed and locked up and jailed
When you got home youre mom got nailed
And not by me but by the pro
The one who don't need ammo, so lets go
I ll beat you hand by hand so don't be lame
This is just a game, but you won't get the fame


p.s Edited and accepted only first 6 lines

Subzero:
you cant hack my tactics, i bring the drama like theatrics
i got crazy an-tics, you a man-bitch, wit a pussy and man-tits

i leave this cat in fits, verb-ill's verse lookin' like a motherfuckin' word spill
i keep shit trill, the last real action hero, its subzero, more gangster than de niro

my rhymes are on a whole different level, you a fake rebel
you got no chance, you on the dance floor and i'm the devil

FLOW - Subzero
STRUCTURE - Subzero
PUNCHES - Subzero
MULTIES - Subzero
RHYMES - Subzero
VOCAB - Subzero
COMPLEXITY - Subzero
NAMEPLAY - Subzero
OTHER- Subzero


Subzero

[C-Game]

3-0 KO

congrats sub0