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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 15th, '07, 21:25

FLOW

Flow is not structure everyone should remember that, flow is how well it comes off the tounge, there is no beat in texting battling so this is how you judge it, if you are stopping and re reading and confused how the next words come about he has BAD Flow , it also about were every rythm

Example 1 -
see ma words kill with this word skill, you aint blaze your glaze,
twenty ways i smash you, just bash through, throw you in the trash to,

that bar by Tournament rapper "WordSkill" has good flow if you check the rythming, Blaze and Glaze end the line the next rythm is Ways witch flows the lines together, he then opts to change the rythming scene but still has the flow

Example 2 -
fuck you , tuck blew , machine dun firing range
then you spill and i kill your posse

that bar i just made has bad flow, the rythming starts nice then he changes it and doesnt flow the lines together


STRUCTURE


Structure is simple and good structure usually is a good plus for flow

Example 1 -
am a deadly spitter but more deadly hitter
you a deadly shitter but even shitter spitter

that bar i just made has great structure both has 8 words with near the same ammount of sylybles aswell, if you do not know what a sylyble is please google

Example 2 -
am a deadly spitter but more deadly hitter
you really a fucking deadly shitter even worse your a shit spitter

that bar i just made has terrible structure, some words dont even need to be there

always check your verse before posting and check the structure count the words and sylybles and you should no mess up on it, it doesnt need to be perfect just no bad enough to notice



PUNCHES

Punches is a BIG part in battling its were you compare your oppenent to somethin humilating or make a personel shot about him/his skill/his family anythign that can humilate him.....BUT punches can also be used to compare yourself to something but that is alot less effective and not usually considered a good punch

Example 1 -
once i win this we can battle agan if you wanne
i feel bad, you got your penis size from you momma

That bar is usng a punch "inches" used in a battle a while back, not the exact same lines though, as you can see its funny and its smart coz "momma's" dont have penis's and its personel

Example 2 - see your so scared you gonni pee
youll run away like a floating tree

That bar i just made there, and some ppl straight up may think its good but it sucks, you see tree's dont run so the comparrison is shit, they cant run, and why a floating tree is just stupid


MULTIES

We should all know what multis is but ill show examples

Example 1 -
sick-o-matic
trick-to-static

Example 2 -
Prime-fanatic
Time-automatic

both of them are multis , because the have the same sylybles and all the words rythm

example 3 -
Sick-o-matic
Trick-to-ya-static

that isnt a multi because of the added word "ya"

RHYMES

Rythms are above but also the words used

example 1 -
imma shoot threw you
itll end you life to

thats bad rythming very simple words that everyone has done a million times

example 2 -
this is just like climb and practice
and my rythms like cactus

now that isnt super rythming but better , using Practice and cactus is pretty smart , cactus aint a commenly used word...

VOCAB

vocab or vocabulary ir simply haing a bigger knowledge of more words, i wont do example but if you always rythm with , To , You , Blue , Moo , you have bad vocab , if you want an example of excellent vocabulaury listen to McMaybe, the only way to get this better is read books/dictionarys/thesaruases


COMPLEXITY

complexity is a mixture or everything , rythmes
, multis , name play, vocabulary


Example 1 -
sick-o-matic like your hair a trick to static my rythms dramatic,
flow in time automatic, im real, you just a prime fanatic,
see your neck a snap it, now check, a rap it no guess a tap it,
you spit shit a spit wit dont quit just admit my rythms transmit,
through your mind and time but a dont mind this crime,

those lines by me arent extremely complex but the complexity is there, multi, rythming in line multis ect

Example 2 -
im a real street gangsta
your just a normal wanksta
id even say your a pranksta
you just aint no gangsta

very simple lines no complexity at all

NAMEPLAY

nameplay now i beileive a lot of people do not think about battles enough to notice name play at times so ill shall explain

Example -
another magazine im goin to get shot off quick
you aint mean just coz you cock off dick

that was the first bar in a battle " 24 mag vs Mc-Menace" now that bar was by mc menace and has gook examples of word play....his opponent is called 24 mag so the first reference to magazine is nameplay , he is referring to magazine that your read and the magazine in a gun...shot of quick is also name play witht he word shot, get shot of somehting can mean throw it away ( through the magazine as in the one you read away ) then it can also mean shot a gun off ( as in shoot the magazine in a gun off ) that first line interlinks the both uses of wrodplay..... the last line has a litte aswell, Cock of dick....now cock of dick is using cock as name play you can cock somehting of as in suck so suck off dick , or cock it of as in cock of a gun... thats name play

OTHER

other is simply the refferences used ( metephors ) any effects like alliteration you liked or did you enjoy it overall



thank you for readin this i hope it helps every one knew to voting and i hope everyone at leasts galnces it over to make sure i did everything right

please vote by these explanations

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Postby C-Game » Jan 15th, '07, 21:29

NICE POST BAR....

WE HAVE A SMALL VOTIN PROBLEM COZ SOMETIMES DA CATS ARE GETTIN WRONGFULLY UNDERSTOOD BY THE VOTERS..........


PLS READ THIS...
IF U THINK A DROP IS TOO COMPLEX AND HARDER TO GRASP PLEASE DONT VOTE UNLESS U UNDERSTAND DA COCEPT OF VOTIN

I WANT THIS TOURNAMENT TO BE DA BEST

IF THIS GOESS WELL MORE GREAT TOURNEYS WILL EMERGE.....

SO FAR ITS GOIN SMOOTHLY ......
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 15th, '07, 21:41

thx cgame :sweating:


Im trying to make this More easy to read, but seriously everyone should take a glance especially people who may be new to this or people who just werent sure, no one has any esxcuse to say " no one had any nameplay" when someone else looks through and finds 3 examples
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Postby C-Game » Jan 15th, '07, 21:44

Bar wrote:thx cgame :sweating:


Im trying to make this More easy to read, but seriously everyone should take a glance especially people who may be new to this or people who just werent sure, no one has any esxcuse to say " no one had any nameplay" when someone else looks through and finds 3 examples


agreed
a lot of ppl misunderstand it
and other thing is complexity which they dont understandd...
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Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 25th, '07, 05:37

I know I do I can make whole sentances ryme no 1 else on earth does that like me well may b
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Postby 4D » Jan 25th, '07, 09:59

Rain Matrix wrote:I know I do I can make whole sentances ryme no 1 else on earth does that like me well may b


Lmao, you do know how to blow your own trumpet. :whistle:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 25th, '07, 16:12

Rain Matrix wrote:I know I do I can make whole sentances ryme no 1 else on earth does that like me well may b


usually you dont coz most times you have about 3-6 more sylbles and that stops it from being a full multi sentence, you justpost to make it look like a big ryhmeing sentence and all the people here who aint ecpereinced see it layed as a multi and just go " oh dam whole sentence multi" when if they opened there eyes theyd see it wasnt.......sometimes you do but alot of times you dont
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Postby 4D » Jan 25th, '07, 17:44

Bar wrote:
Rain Matrix wrote:I know I do I can make whole sentances ryme no 1 else on earth does that like me well may b


usually you dont coz most times you have about 3-6 more sylbles and that stops it from being a full multi sentence, you justpost to make it look like a big ryhmeing sentence and all the people here who aint ecpereinced see it layed as a multi and just go " oh dam whole sentence multi" when if they opened there eyes theyd see it wasnt.......sometimes you do but alot of times you dont


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Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 25th, '07, 17:51

Dam I'll get on that tho check audio
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