Topical Battle

[C-Game]

Topic: Death

the grim reeper a thief, he go deeper than beef,
he give the whole family greif, well i got belief,
that in deaths theres life, and in life death,
so take you last breath coz, you dont know when its coming,
its like a drumming sound, it births at a small pace,
as the years go on it becomes a race, wrinkles on your face,
death murder suicide and homicide, that how the greeper ride,
in death you can find you pride or collide with satan inside,
no straighten or slide, in death your dead , doesnt matter the tread,
it could be blood shead and spread so your whole coffins red,
you got to deal with it, i do it through spit that dont mean i admit,
but a permit to cry and a do it, cuz death aint no laugh
and on behalf of the greif the world should squash the beef
coz mosts of the deaths we read, there aint a fucking need,

Tread - the path
it births at small pace - this line is using a drumming noise to project a child being born , being born young and small growing into something big and loud..
No straighten or slide - like straighten out a problem for just let it slide



topic: Philadelphia Eagles/ Philadelphia Eagles pride



invincible like back in the vet with Vince Papali
but i aint playin no college ball in Texas or Raleigh (NC)
what the games been missing, fishing for bait, realing in philly for the championship
ive been here before with vets knockin at door, but as far as the NFL, i havent been handed shit
the vet is gone but his spirit lives on
everybodys crying over the Saints, i wouldnt be an Eagles fan if i didnt sing this song
donovan mcnabb crotch down, but he dont know everynight i think of heroes
so leary will you rescue me, cause in my time ive seen some goodfellas play ball like robert deniro
westbrook go in stride, its the philly pride
with the old ruggid jerseys, even jim jones said we fly high
so watch the birds flap as they make their way down the field
yet superbowl vs the patriots we forgot to yield
nobody believed in us, we were doubtful to do the unthinkful
if im drowning in my sorrows for an eagles win tomorrow, then i mine as well sink in this pool
racism of rush limbow, just play your role and follow criticques
even andy reid has choked words at times, but let the big man speak
randall cunningham, jaworsky and mcnabb forced me to bring about this at task
maybe you'll love us when we're dead, forgotten about and have passed
i live to see the birds burn flesh at steak like puttin Gino's on the grill
i love more of the unreal, Dawkins is more then a soldier; he knows how to respectively scar and kill
so guarentee me nor the NFC East's birds no sleep before sunday
the supernova reads 10-6 in the skies, i know a championship ring comes someday


everyone this is a Topical Battle you vote on witch topic you enjoyed the most and witch on the you think was projected the best, also on the ryhme's but thats not the mos timportant thing



p.s edit ( this is an annonymous battle by TR members ) SO VOTE NOW

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

votes on this bitches

[4D]

This is very hard to choose, I enjoyed both topics, and both writers verse about their topics.

Both were written very well, with good rhymes in both. The death topic was easily the most interesting topic, and the easiest one to write about. And I think The person writing that verse showed the best rhymes. But, the perons doing the other verse had a much harder challenge, tryin to beat a verse on Death, with a verse on sport. I think the second person made a very boring topic sound very poetic, so I`m gonna just give it to the second verse. Very, very close battle, both were great!!

[4D]

Jeez, there's some lazy fuckers in here that can't read two verses, and post an opinion.

Beginning to think these topical battles, which were a good idea, and fun to do, were a waste of fuckin time.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

yeh some people just laxy priks witch is annoying coz most eople moan when there battles aint voted on

[C-Game]

well both were good....
i know this is da first time im votin in a topical battle ..
so here goes..
first ill talk abt philadelphia eagles..da topic was nicely elabaroted in da verse. but i didnt find any complexity and some good rhymes..thr were some good metaz in it. it was enjoyable as well ..
Now ill say why i gave ma vote to DEATH..simply because it had a nice touch wen readin and da rhymes and da occasianal multies were better than da first.. and abt da grim reaper was kool as well.. and i enjoyed more in dat topic...

[Rain Matrix]

Tha DEATH rap was tha best only bcuz it fits my aesthetic my opinion is that tha eagles make a better band then a football team

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[silversniper786]

DEATH is better lyrically but i think it'll be hard makin it flow, if you spit it in a mic