LW : Intricate Murderer vs Lyracist (CLOSED)

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FLOW
STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

5 votes to win
3-0 KO


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Lyracist

this person claims to be a murderer but i aint never heard of her after im done u'll be my bitch no my chauffeur
u'll call me monsieur roi just like troy y would anyone employ u ur my decoy toy too so say adieu to the crowd

i vowed to destroy u and leave u in a shroud of sorrow it'll be a ko by the end of tomorrow
ur a cheap rip off like ferraro i'll leave u smoked like a claro u know a cigar like fat guys in a bar

i'll be playing the guitar at ur funeral even strangle u with a string attackin like a bee sting
i'll never bow down to the king till u show me what u can bring last battle u couldn't do a thing

im a lyracist hurtin u like ur cyst ur throwin punches but everyone missed i'll be leaving u in ashes
u use so many dashes like they are supposed to give me gashes im blowin u up with explosive gasses

exp:
monsieur roi=Mr. king

Intricate Murderer

this-decade-u-heard-of-the intricate-murderer mixed-wit-hate,-murderd-a hypa-bitch
named Lyra-cist whos tryna-kiss my penis-for-free jesus-his-G nver seen-sluts-dis-weak

ill beat-up-this-freak like a kid wit playboy beat-up-his-dick leavin u red-and-so-sore
ur dead-and-u-know da blood sheds-that-so-gore spillin in between ur legs-and-oh-no

as Lyra-weeps his vagina-bleeds and oh!! its not-"his!!"-its-a-her oh-shit-its-incurred
theres no-dick-its-some-fur this bitch lyra-cist-is-a-girl don't lye-racist-ur-so-burned

ur buried abyss-in-a-urn but this-is-better without bein a decease-begger intimidated
and get incinerated by the invigorated me like a corpse-in-flames ur gone-ur-slained

exp:
invigorate-strentghtend
incinerate- burn
abyss-deep deapth
incurred - blamed
lye-racist - nameplay of lyracist (lie-racist )
"his!!"-its-a-her - not a guy but a gal

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Intricate Murderer , got this one , lyracists punches were week/pointless, and his ryhmes were just ok, Intricate Murderer
had nice punches and the ebtter flow he also had the better multis and overall ryhming

my vote: Intricate Murderer

[4D]

FLOW - Intricate Murder, overly long bars killed lyracists flow
STRUCTURE - Intricate Murder, lyracist's were too long
PUNCHES - Intricate Murder, the dashes personal was good by lyracist, but got killed by IM's punches and witty jokes
MULTIES - Both good, but IM just killed it, lyra kinda fell off after the first bar
RHYMES - ^Same
VOCAB - Lyracise, Im had some big words, but Lyra's french ones impressed me
COMPLEXITY - - Intricate Murder
NAMEPLAY - Intricate Murder, lie-racist was NICE!
OTHER - Enjoyed both actually, pity Lyra's bars were too long, coulda been closer

Vote - Intricate Murder

[C-Game]

2-0 IM

keep em votes comin...

[C-Game]

2-0 IM

keep em votes comin...

[Flamez]

FLOW - Intricate Murderer
STRUCTURE - Intricate Murderer
PUNCHES - Intricate Murderer
MULTIES - Intricate Murderer
RHYMES - Intricate Murderer
VOCAB - Intricate Murderer
COMPLEXITY - Intricate Murderer
NAMEPLAY - Intricate Murderer
OTHER - Intricate Murderer (enjoyment)

Intricate Murderer won all categories so he gets my final vote

[C-Game]

3-0 KO IM
closed