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LW: Souless vs Public Enemy (CLOSED)

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LW: Souless vs Public Enemy (CLOSED)

Postby C-Game » Feb 17th, '07, 08:38

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Simple votes like I vote X is not accpeted
must give a brief description on why u voted him OR/AND
vote on ALL/ SOME of these categories

FLOW
STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

5 votes to win
4-1 TKO
3-0 KO



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Souless


i cause damage,ya mansions a canvas, ya cant manage,
shredded like lettuce leaves,he stole my nickname,im the true public enemy

knock off a few, of anyone that you send at me
rob the rest, take what i want cuz i said its free

control this, im souless so connect with me
ya cant come to do it, run ya pockets dry, never filled with fluid

bruised kid now check ya neck, my text black and blued it
put it on a post it pass, tack and glue it, crazy how my rap traps the ruined


Public Enemy

i'll grab ur neck n make-it-twist cause everyone's fuckin ur momma with-their-fist now im a public enemy
attackin me ur punches-missed moving left n right to avoid ur lines'll be destroyed leave u with a big void

y were u ever employed as an emcee ur lines aren't even funny got ur bitch callin my hunny
cause money don't mean shit it's what u spit and how u transmit ur message to the voters

u'll be another one of those floters the same as all those boaters when their motors that suck blew up
puttin u on ricki lake lookin like a battered-wife the only thing you'll beat me in is a race to the after-life

i'll rock-a-fella then stock-n-tell-ya ur talk's a failure staler then a cactus come on man u need practice
but u know the fact is u'll never win im killin u for every sin u've done cause ur souless here hold this
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Postby Sleepy » Feb 17th, '07, 11:40

FLOW =Souless
STRUCTURE =Souless
PUNCHES =None really.Tie
MULTIES =Public enemy
RHYMES =Public enemy
VOCAB =Tie
COMPLEXITY =Souless
NAMEPLAY =Public enemy
OTHER=Public enemy


Vote=Public Enemy

Tight battle but public enemy shaded it.


i'll grab ur neck n make-it-twist cause everyone's fuckin ur momma with-their-fist now im a public enemy



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Postby Flamez » Feb 17th, '07, 17:59

FLOW: Souless
STRUCTURE: Souless
PUNCHES: Public Enemy
MULTIES: Public Enemy
RHYMES: Public Enemy
VOCAB: Public Enemy
COMPLEXITY: Souless
NAMEPLAY: Public Enemy
OTHER: Public Enemy

Vote: Public Enemy
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Postby Enimee » Feb 17th, '07, 18:47

FLOW: Souless
STRUCTURE: Souless
PUNCHES: Souless
MULTIES: Public Enemy
RHYMES: Souless
VOCAB: Public Enemy
COMPLEXITY: Souless
NAMEPLAY: Public Enemy
OTHER: Souless

Uh vote: Souless

some of p-e's shit didnt rhyme.
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Postby C-Game » Feb 17th, '07, 22:03

2-1 PE ...keep em votes comin
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Postby Hadez » Feb 17th, '07, 22:42

FLOW: Souless
STRUCTURE: tie
PUNCHES: Public Enemy
MULTIES: Public Enemy
RHYMES: Souless
VOCAB: tie
COMPLEXITY: tie
NAMEPLAY: Souless
OTHER: tie


vote goes to Souless. Public Enemy's lines were too long in my opinion. it was like tryna read a run-on sentence.
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Postby so_shady915 » Feb 18th, '07, 00:25

FLOW: Souless
STRUCTURE:both
PUNCHES: soulless
MULTIES: souless
RHYMES: Souless
VOCAB: both
COMPLEXITY: both
NAMEPLAY: Souless
OTHER

soulless verse in my opinion had the best diss in it, good punches multis and erything
dope shit
goes to soulless
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Postby C-Game » Feb 18th, '07, 07:37

3-2 Souless
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 18th, '07, 12:33

hmm...this is hard really hard, very close battle, publice got good rythmes and punches, i like souless's flow, hmm...i got to give it to public, i had more ejoymet form it

my vote: public
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Postby C-Game » Feb 18th, '07, 18:16

3-3 tie....
more votes pls...
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Postby 4D » Feb 18th, '07, 20:07

FLOW - Souless, 'cos of slightly better structure
STRUCTURE - Souless, both had dodgy structure, souless slightly better
PUNCHES - Tie, both average punches
MULTIES - Tie, both had a few decent multies
RHYMES - Tie, as above
VOCAB - Tie, Both fairly standard vocabulary
COMPLEXITY - Public Enemy, had an awkward rhyme scheme, but kind of lost flow because of it.
NAMEPLAY - Tie, both had a little nameplay

Souless wins 2-1, and 5 ties.
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Feb 18th, '07, 23:48

hard choice....hmmm
but i vote fo souless...flow was better and better punches...
so i vote fo souless
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Postby C-Game » Feb 20th, '07, 11:20

5-3 Souless
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