ThomasAguanis Vs. Iceaxe (VOTE NOW!)

[ThomasAguanis]

Rules:
6 Lines
No flip or feed on opponents rhyme
First to 4 votes wins, or 3-0 wins K.O

Voting must be done by categories:
Flow
Structure
Punches
Nameplay
Rhymes
Multies
Vocab/Complexity
Others, etc

[ThomasAguanis]

Iceaxe writes crap, slight rap that I strike, slap until it might crack/
him fight back? I'm disintegrating this fraud, penetrating his flaws/

he's not intimidating a God, it's impossible dude I'm not gonna lose/
you'll eat hospital food, you try to top me? you're tonsils you'll lose/

Tom's on a cruise and you're starting to fade than grow dark in the haze/
you're marked and I'm raged, you win? you need to sharpen you're blade/


edit: explanations can be given if necessary but verse is quite self-explanatory
Hmm but lose is used twice but has different meanings (in case you didn't know)
1st lose=be defeated and 2nd lose=to be taken away

[IceAxe]

^ hot drop Tom

Well, im sure i lost this, but I tried

your lame-bars cant maim-scar or rip veins-off like chain-saws
get slain-marred your game's-flawed it's vain-art display-hard or decay-apart

you tryin to post a fight? cant hope to strike the pope of rhyme
become a ghost tonight, you're toast allright, shoulda made the most of life

shoulda kept-away, I accept-ta-slay expect-de-cay when I eject-a-ray, cant
deflect-away my intensive-blaze with disinfec-tant-sprays not effective-nay


my structure's fucked

[Tash8]

Flow: Tom
Structure: Tom
Punches: Tom
Nameplay: ice didn't even use his name, so Tom
Rhymes: Tom
Multies: Ice had more and kinda difference ones, so Ice
Vocab/Complexity: Ice was more complex, tom was simple but amazing
Others, etc: Tom

this was dope shit by tom

[Global]

Flow ; Tom
Structure ; Tom
Punches ; Tom
Nameplay ; Tom
Rhymes ; Tom
Multies ; Tom
Vocab/Complexity ;Tom
Others, etc ; Ice

Overall Tom, Sorry Ice but his just good

[IceAxe]

^i know, Tom's was great.... i tried

[Global]

^i know, Tom's was great.... i tried

Hey you'll get there

Least you beat me *doesent remember if global vs ice*

[Tash8]

^i know, Tom's was great.... i tried

yea his was dope, yours woulda beat almost anyone, but not toms

[ThomasAguanis]

thanks for the votes. and great verse iceaxe, a lot better than I remember seeing you post when you 1st came here.



2-0
More votes please

[4D]

Last and final vote needed for the knockout goes to Tom, of course. No offence at all to you Ice, you're verse actually wasn't that bad at all man. I repect your balls Ice, battling me and Tom in close proximity and also, your ability to accept when the opponent is just on a different level, and not bitch about votes and the like. Because a lot of people could learn from that. Also, I see potential in your verses Ice, don't be discouraged, keep tryin and learning, you learn very fast in this game.

I don't think I need to break it down into cats, but can if neceessary.

Also, great to see ya back doin your stuff Tom, we miss having the top lyrical talents on the battle stage!

[lil_bayly]

What the fuck!! U people reall need to get off the fucking multies, it's not skill and u dont win shit with it, every time i read ur people's shit its filled full, serious knock it off its a shit way to rhyme, and for those that think im saying it cause i cant do it, here's an example of how u faggots sound:

"Before I post-a-thread I make toast-with-bread
The coast-is-fed up with most-u-said
I aint close-ta-dead or tryin to boast-my-cred
If I'm dyin tonight, its cause my nose-just-bled"

Wow yea that was awesome, see my point? its boring

[4D]

What the fuck!! U people reall need to get off the fucking multies, it's not skill and u dont win shit with it, every time i read ur people's shit its filled full, serious knock it off its a shit way to rhyme, and for those that think im saying it cause i cant do it, here's an example of how u faggots sound:

"Before I post-a-thread I make toast-with-bread
The coast-is-fed up with most-u-said
I aint close-ta-dead or tryin to boast-my-cred
If I'm dyin tonight, its cause my nose-just-bled"

Wow yea that was awesome, see my point? its boring

You really are amazing man!!!


You're verse against me was muck man, it was shit, now live with it, and stop being a bitch. It's not about multies alone, it's about the whole package, multies, complexity, punches, personals, nameplay. Gotte ba able to do it all. All I've seen you do is drop a few very weak punches with very little to no creativity. Thomas had punches and nameplay in the multies, and they flowed very easily, not something you could do on anywhere near his level.

[IceAxe]

thanks for the comment on my shit guys... I actually thought it was terrible as i typed it, but i guess i was wrong

good battle Tom

[ThomasAguanis]

good battle to you too man, thanks for doing it

and thanks for 4D