LW2: Hollow Man vs Phanton

[Tash8]

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FLOW
STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

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Phantom
i'm gonna slam on honest hands, and turn this bitch see through like a hologram
hollow tips will blow off lips to make you wonder why you're called hollow man

you barrin' nervously, you ain't half a person g, you're hardly hurtin' me,
i'm scarrin' perfectly, hard alertingly leave you under my empire like nazi germany

i kill time i got deceased patience, supreme like free masons, you need three aces
to beat my hand, coz when the beat's blazin', i guarantee you gonna meet satan


Hollow Man
u wanna holler to hollow man, ill hollow ur soul when i speak
and weaken, my goals to defeat

rose to my feet merkin my foes with my speech, my verse has u restin in peace
deep im disturbin ur sleep have u eternally weep

u wanna cock n load, im hollow cant knock or corrode,
a phantom same as ur talent invisible not to be sold

[4D]

FLOW - Tie, both flowed pretty good
STRUCTURE - Phantom, Hollow mans was a little all over the shop
PUNCHES - Phantom
MULTIES - Phantom, although Hollow Man had some good multies too
RHYMES - Phantom
VOCAB - Phantom
COMPLEXITY - Phantom
NAMEPLAY Tie, both had a little bit of nameplay
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

With ties counting as a vote each, it goes 8-2 to Phantom. It looks like a landslide victory, but Hollow Man, I see some potential, you had some nice multies, just need to keep trying and you'll improve a lot more, and tighten things up on all cats!

Good battle

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

FLOW hollow man
STRUCTURE phantom
PUNCHES phantom
MULTIES phantom
RHYMES phantom
VOCAB phantom
COMPLEXITY phantom
NAMEPLAY phantom his nameplay against hollow man was better
OTHER phantom...enjoyed it more...but didnt like the nazi line so much lol..

overallphantom

[C-Game]

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phanton every cat


different standards here, phantom was way above in my opinion

Vote - phanton