LW2 : Onslaught vs Ghost Writer ( VOTE DAMN IT )

[C-Game]

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FLOW
STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

3 votes to win



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Ghost Writer

i'm the one they hire , when they desire to push it higher, i'm the ghost-writer
kepping the fire burning, admired because of my attire, i'm the east to west coast-rider

be careful what you chose to do, because my crew are like hungry Voracious-sharks
you can't flow in this dark water, stop with your audacious-bark

my rhymes help rappers digest the excess of stress-caused
laugh as "onslaught" is about to be thaught to confess weakness, then press-pause

Onslaught

u won't be able to withstand this onslaught ur the one falling for the gangster image im not
u'll be hard to spot ima make u a ghost u aint a writer the brighter side ur the 1 im defeatin

so im beatin u down n i dont care whos-home cause i'll be the one pissing on ur tomb-stone
ur not grown clown im in ur town to steal the rap crown im the reason ur pants turned brown

so dont make a sound cause it's like ur in the pound gettin eaten by a hound
a k-9 thats vicious im tired of babysitting these bitches this aint 1 of ur niches

[IceAxe]

FLOW: Ghost
STRUCTURE: Onslaught
PUNCHES: Ghost, but this was really close for me
MULTIES: Ghost
RHYMES: Onslaught
VOCAB: Ghost
COMPLEXITY: Tie
NAMEPLAY: Tie
OTHER: Ghost

7-4 Ghost Writer

[Rain Matrix]

FLOW onslaught
STRUCTURE ghost writer
PUNCHES onslaught
RHYMES onslaught
VOCAB onslaught
NAMEPLAY onslaught

OVERALL- onslaught didn't puff himself up at all he attacked full force with better rhymes

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FLOW- ghost writer
STRUCTURE- onslought
PUNCHES- onslought
MULTIES- ghost writer
RHYMES- ghost writer
VOCAB-ghost writer
COMPLEXITY- ghost writer
NAMEPLAY- onslought
OTHER- onslought went at his oponent more

vote: ghost writer*

*just coz of your vocab and ryhming, but your drop was far from a good battle drop you first bar was biggin up yourself, you had basically no word or name play or punches towards your oponent, please take that in to consideration

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FLOW onslaught
STRUCTURE ghost writer
PUNCHES onslaught
RHYMES onslaught
VOCAB onslaught
NAMEPLAY onslaught

OVERALL- onslaught didn't puff himself up at all he attacked full force with better rhymes

rain, you need to do ALL cats listen not just a chosen view, you vote doesnt count untill you fix it

[Rain Matrix]

I called it as I saw it, so remove my vote sorry LW combatants my bad

[C-Game]

I called it as I saw it, so remove my vote sorry LW combatants my bad

nah its oki.... anyway vote in da battles mate... ill accept ur vote under da condition that ... even if da other cats goes to GW , onslaught wins...

so da score is 2-1 to GW

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more votes people

[Tash8]

FLOW - Ghost
STRUCTURE - Onslaught, he had most of his lines closer though
PUNCHES - Onslaught
MULTIES - Ghost
RHYMES - onslaught
VOCAB - ghost
COMPLEXITY - umm, neither were really complex IMO, there wasn't much of wordplay or something that'd make it complex
NAMEPLAY: Tie
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off) i liked ghost much better

6-5

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3-1 to ghost writer

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