Doe Ray Me .:VS:. McMaybe

[Doe Ray Me]

10 lines, 3-0 = ko, otherwise first to 5 votes

good luck mate :P

[Doe Ray Me]

i changed the lines to 10, less reading for people, cos i want this one voted on

Im a psychopathic maniac with this 'lyrical-shit', you can bring your damn crew, and still i'll be 'killin-ya-quick'/
People sayin damn this kids 'bars-are-ill', and you aint 'ready-for-this', you need to 'up-ya-skill', before i scar and 'confetti-you-bitch'/
I got you choked up, you dunno 'how-to-respond', but fuck it imma keep comin hard, till i can say 'now-you-be-gone'/
It's like nuclear attacks, the way im 'annihilating-you', and they know your scared, 'thats-why-they-hating-you'/
look here, its clear i dont 'fuck-around', so you better be careful before you 'run-ya-mouth', or it'll be lyrical homicide, like the 'guns-are-out'/
Actin like you the next emcee to 'make-it-big', but i listened to a 'couple-of-tracks', you just 'faking-it', just be real man, before you get 'trouble-on-wax'/
Your like a jehovah witness, always 'gettin-ignored', this time next year, your be doing your 'quitting-record'/
Type of sick cunt, that'll lick out a girl on 'her-period', this bitch needs to be taught a lesson, so imma 'murk-this-idiot'/
There aint no coming back from this 'battle-bitch', your career's over before its even started, how you gonna 'handle-this?'/
Im like a cancer with 'no-cure', and you know the 'ends-here', i just 'hope-your' ready, cos this is the point when your 'friends-disappear'/

EDIT: fixed typo lol