So AmAzIn!!! vs Official BlueBoys(Vote Now)

[So AmAzIn!!!]

8 Liner
3 tah 0 k-o
firss to 5 wins

Duhhhhhh ..... Post Up Playboi

[Jay_LP1]

o shit wait I meant 8 lines

and the one who challenges post first.

So you've to post first

[So AmAzIn!!!]

(okay!) AmAzIn? He MUSTA LIVED A BUBBLE/ He's Sick, He'll Leave Dis FUCKA RIPPED A COUPLE/
Cuz, see blue boy? hes a lame an only time he 'seen A Maze In/Amazin' WASA JIGSAW PUZZLE !!!!!!/
yup! AMAZINS DOPE/ erry 'line' like MAKIN COKE/ i juss put this 'white shit inna BAG' AN GO !!!!!/
OBB? even dis FAGGET KNOWS/ dat im 'MAKIN DOE'/ so much, dat i leave tha BAK'RY SOLD !!!!!!/
So's tha MAN, HERE DA DUMMY KNOWS/ he fucks up, he sees tha HANDZ HERE DAS PUMPIN BLOWS/
so when da lead pop u dead ock, it wasa 'headshot' buh DAM! WHERE DA STOMACH GO !!!!!!!!!?/
chump buck, or youll get 'pumped up', juss RUN AN GO !!!!/ dawg u wack, KNOW YAH PLACE AN/
before i BLOW YAH FACE IN, u inna toyshop(cuz only time 'boy hot?') ...... ..... Is SO AMAZIN!!!/
(Not Even Hot Wit Tha Heat, aka yah boy) .... Yah-Digg?

*Ding Ding*

(whos tha winnnerrr?) ................. ........... So AmAzIn!!! (cause he was what?) ....................... .......... So AmAzIn!!!

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Official BlueBoys you have 2 days to drop or im closing this and so Amazing will will by defualt.

[Jay_LP1]

It'll be up by tonight

[So AmAzIn!!!]

*checks da watch*

*tick ...... tock .....*

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tomorrow (uk time) if there is a drop so amazin wins

[Jay_LP1]

ok here is the real quickie that I did . I'm busy with a lot of stuff . Sorry for being so late . Anyways dude don't mind on what I wrote . I was really pissed at the time of writing . ok?

Time on you is hard , u call urself so amazin
your rap is like fuck , bitch you're so fakin

tryin to write complex like your own genetics
makes u look gay , you're a religious fanatic

u son of LADEN , like him you're so proud
u fuck your own sis and milk her like a cow

In the end I wanna say , don't act like a cunt
coz u turn into pussy whenever we CONFRONT


religious fanatic - a person who considers his religion to be the best and look down upon other religions

LADEN- OSMAMA BIN LADEN . He is also a religious fanatic as we all know lol

Milk her like a cow - I don't think I've to explain this . You're very smart

[Jay_LP1]

VOTEEEEEEEEEEE

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FLOW - OBB
STRUCTURE - OBB
PUNCHES -OBB
MULTIES - were there any multis ? so Amazing gets it for his attempt
RHYMES - OBB
VOCAB - OBB
COMPLEXITY - none
NAMEPLAY - none
OTHER - none


bad battle, so amazin you were bad, i mean really bad, talking about shooting and money and crack i mean wtf its a text battle to show of skill not a boasting match.

OBB gets my vote but overall bad battle

[So AmAzIn!!!]

lol wont argue
1-0

[Jay_LP1]

well as I said I did it really quickly . Next time I'll try to make it more complex

Thanks for the vote Bar