Shady Babie vs Sven (vote please)

[Robbie G]

you make fun of my name i'll do the same
barbie toy, what were you thinking boy thats lame
I ain't involved in crime,i'm trying to be smarter this time
Not going to jail in the middle of my prime so I got a partner in crime
his names chet, got him robbin shit while I watch my t.v set
so it pays to have someone in debt, paying you back with their blood and sweat
lemme play with your namea lil bit here here
it's starts with a 2 and ends with an n just like ken, now whos queer
my name ends with babie not cuz im a girl but I can handle a lady
the ones your fucking are eighty, now we both know whos more shady

Sorry that was really quick.

Good luck man.

[Grizzly]

I'ma go with Shady Babie, without going into too much detail because I think he would win every category to be honest.

Sven there is something there but you just didn't drop it as well as you should have half of it didn't even rhyme

So my vote is to Shady Babie

[Robbie G]

Thanks for the vote man.

[Robbie G]

Theres a few lines there that I can't seem to rhyme but most rhyme if you say them a certain way.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

FLOW -- Sven
STRUCTURE -- both need work..but this goes to Sven
PUNCHES -- Svenn becuz shady babie basiclly flipped(no own ideas..not much) sven's drop
MULTIES -- ...
RHYMES -- Shady Babie...
VOCAB -- Shady babie
COMPLEXITY -- Shady babie
NAMEPLAY -- Sven..obviously..Barbie shit was dope (no hate towards shady babie)
PERSONALS -- Sven i guess
OTHER(enjoyment, metaphores, creativity)-Sven...liked the blood line

Overall:6-4....vote goes to sven
i see some potential there...Structure should be improved ...no hate

[Robbie G]

Thanks guys

it's cool chris, better to be honest than nice.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

okay i guess nobody else gon vote, so shady baby won 2-1 .. congrats
and thanx to everyone that has voted, espcially chris for his constructive criticism and chet for givin reasons for his voting

please dont try do my job, you may just tyring to help but its isnt helping its just messing up the thread.

I'ma go with Shady Babie, without going into too much detail because I think he would win every category to be honest.

Sven there is something there but you just didn't drop it as well as you should have half of it didn't even rhyme

So my vote is to Shady Babie

isnt detialed enough sorry please break your vote down more for it to count.



Score is 1-1

bump for votes.

[Robbie G]

alright thanks Bar

[Solace]

FLOW -- Shady
STRUCTURE -- 2v3n
PUNCHES -- Shady
RHYMES -- Shady
VOCAB -- 2v3n
MULTIES -- Shady
COMPLEXITY -- Shady
NAMEPLAY -- Shady

6-2

Shady is my vote!

[Robbie G]

Alright, thanks for the vote man.

Is two enough to close this down or is it three?