Nimbus vs RookieRapper

[Nimbus_9]

3-0 ko, 8 lines, 4 bars, no flippin or feedin

Naughty Stan, praisin Em raised him into a cocky fan
Say “I’m live wit at mic” but on paper it’s like Zombieland
Every hit’ll probably land on a hoe like pirate ships
fire spit, you'll retire quick fo' testin dog like Michael Vick
the kaiser rips, rehab from being a faggot, losin' now
cause those lines crooked like bells palsy uni brow
shoot him down, this rook like all cops in Iran
wet him up so bad people calling you pawn/pond

[RookieRapper]

Every hit you make is shit and I'll dismiss
As you hit and miss I'll piss on you like this
So kiss your name goodbye and delay your game
As you try and remain at the top for one day

My words are deadly and ferocious, emotions
Will be running through quicker than a train in motion
You're atrocious, I'll take this to a new level
You don't wanna mess with me bitch, I'm the devil

[BILI]

Nimbus took this easy
he had better rhymes,his wordplay was on a much higher level,he had better multies,If you want me to break down my vote,I`ll do it,but I think its clear tha Nimb took this one

[RookieRapper]

I know I'm not very good anyway xD Do you guys do this outside as a hobby or professional?

Can you explain how he "owned" me? Cause I really want to know

[BILI]

I know I'm not very good anyway xD Do you guys do this outside as a hobby or professional?

Can you explain how he "owned" me? Cause I really want to know

I`ll just break down my vote
Structure:Rookie
Flow:Rookie,even tho its close
Personals:Nimb(Rookie had no personals at all)
Wordplay:Nimb by far
Punchlines:Nimb again
Multies:Nimb,this is obvious
Other:Nimb again,for that Zombiland and Michael Vick

So 5:2

[RookieRapper]

Thank you for actually giving me a few points Appreciated (Y)

BTW what is with Spyder? He's so forward lol

[Spyder]

Thank you for actually giving me a few points Appreciated (Y)

BTW what is with Spyder? He's so forward lol

i give honest feed bro, sorry i was not in the happiest of moods and you came off very cocky

but i gotta go with nimbus on this one. in every catagorey except structure.
you need to write a battle verse, to your oppenent. your could have been made for anyone ya now?
just look at some of the other battles in here from a while ago and see what i mean

[Nimbus_9]

one more vote

[Solace]

I vote for Nimbus. For real I dont need to explain, if you dont want to count my vote for that well I dont really care. Everything in the breakdown I'd give to Nimbus. I don't at all see what's wrong with the structure, nor flow as BILI did with Nimbus'. But whatev.

[BILI]

I vote for Nimbus. For real I dont need to explain, if you dont want to count my vote for that well I dont really care. Everything in the breakdown I'd give to Nimbus. I don't at all see what's wrong with the structure, nor flow as BILI did with Nimbus'. But whatev.

Rookie`s structure is better then Nimb`s,count the syllables

[Solace]

It's my opinion, I can say whatever I want in my breakdown, no? Actually though I do think I was wrong, I dont see why Nimbus gets structure when I think it's a tie.