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Gibbsy Vs Smithy

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Gibbsy Vs Smithy

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Dec 28th, '09, 05:03

8 Lines, No restrictions...
waiting on you i will go first when i got a sec to write something :happy:
good luck :y:
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Re: Gibbsy Vs Smithy

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Dec 28th, '09, 05:26

okayyy.....

Smithy, Oh so smitten/ with Spittin;Youll Wish you didn't/
Pm a LION for a battle? when this CAT just still a kitten./
listen, as i riddle;Think about who you dissin'/
Now You in a Pickle/ coz Lyrical/ You Just Isnt'/
Come Hard If you Hit Back, This a syllable Bitch Slap/
Maybe You Should See Sense And Not Bother To spit Back/
This Fag/ gettin' Smoked Faster Than Snoops Hash/
News Flash / Im Slim In This Game But Now You Just Like 2Pac..

Okay Broo Good Luck :smoking:

(and Yeah The 2pac line is not very nice but i mean nuttin by it other than rhymin)
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Re: Gibbsy Vs Smithy

Postby Element. » Dec 28th, '09, 13:52

Yours was good :y:

Gibbsy, tryin to spit first, your just the worst/
compairing to eminem, you nothing like him/
you say that shit again you'll end up losing a limb/
thinking ya Jimmy Smith Jr, B-Rabbit in a battle/
I aint no 2pac i follow my own style/
unlike you, you'd better run a mile/
i'd just hit at you, with a smile, put this shit on file,/
as this will just pile, and put you in denial/
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Re: Gibbsy Vs Smithy

Postby gutawafang » Dec 28th, '09, 13:56

complexity- gibb
multis- gibb
other- gibbsy simply came harder. both was too basic, kinda like a verse that can be used against many others. lacking personals. Too little nameplay and wordplay too.

I vote Gibb.
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Re: Gibbsy Vs Smithy

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Dec 28th, '09, 14:12

Thank you oh an my hat goes off to you for brakin down your vote :happy:
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Re: Gibbsy Vs Smithy

Postby Element. » Dec 28th, '09, 17:46

more votes ??!?
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Re: Gibbsy Vs Smithy

Postby Spyder » Dec 28th, '09, 20:03

flow - Gib
punches - Gib
mutlies - Gib
rhymes - GIb(you did much better with your rhymes this time, but as you said the 2pac line doesnt fit anywhere...
structure - Gib, Smithy you need to have each line rhyme with the next. not rhyme within the line
yes it works, but throws flow off :y:
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Re: Gibbsy Vs Smithy

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Dec 28th, '09, 23:44

Thanks Man :happy:

More votes people :)
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Re: Gibbsy Vs Smithy

Postby Justice » Dec 29th, '09, 00:32

my vote - GIBBZY

hands down, punches were harder, structure was better, but am judging this by punchlines only myself


so gibbzy takes this cuz he hit harder, but i respect anybody who tries so keep it comin smithy :b: :b:
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Re: Gibbsy Vs Smithy

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Dec 29th, '09, 01:00

i win right ??
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Re: Gibbsy Vs Smithy

Postby Wic Kid » Dec 29th, '09, 01:02

GibbzyTrShady wrote:i win right ??

If the rule was 3 KO, then yes. You win. Congratz... :flower:
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Re: Gibbsy Vs Smithy

Postby Element. » Dec 29th, '09, 02:10

Nice battle mate :y:
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Re: Gibbsy Vs Smithy

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Dec 29th, '09, 02:14

Smithy wrote:Nice battle mate :y:



Thanks Man :happy: :y:
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Re: Gibbsy Vs Smithy

Postby Spyder » Dec 29th, '09, 02:14

were the rules 3-0 KO?
or just first to 5
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