Jroc vs FAME

[FAME]

so who wants to go first?

[J Roc]

Haha ... i'lll write something up now. You Can Post First If You Want , Or Wait

[FAME]

really dosen't matter, I'll post whenever I finish and the same to you

[FAME]

Take a second and breathe the oxygen
All that snow has got you boxed in
Bout to break this roc down to pebbles
Where you foundation trembles
Hooked too much on that Mary Jane
Even Spiderman won’t save you Jay (J pronounced like Jayy)
Words don’t need to rhyme like Dr. Seuss
So when your on a high I’ll cut you loose
No strings attached in this lyrical combat
Did you read the FaQ it stated to bring your gatt (FaQ pronounced like FQ)

Line 1,5,8: He smokes weed
Line2: In Canada it snows
Line 3&4: Name has roc = rock in this sense
Line 10: His beef with Fa-Q

I worked pretty hard on this, whew. Anyways good luck bro I'm sure I'll have plenty of laughs at your punchlines, like I always do.

[J Roc]

Haha i got 2 bars ... Me & My Boy Are Cyphering On Msn Haha My Badd i'll be done soon

[FAME]

Haha i got 2 bars ... Me & My Boy Are Cyphering On Msn Haha My Badd i'll be done soon

No problem, I bet its a mad cypher btw.

[bullet_boy46]

damn fame wasnt bad me and 2sday got a battle rap going on soon, lol no really

that was dope fame, waiting to hear J Rocs though

[Spyder]

cmon J

[J Roc]

All These Lames Calll Ur Place Hoping They Could Cop a Lay
So Really, Who Knew How Many Guys Have Been In The 'Hall Of Fame' ?
U Need a Past Time, Something Where u Dont Need Ur Ass, Thigh's

so who wants to go first?

Cuz This Is Already Starting To Feeel Like Last Night....
Trick Knock , Tryina 'Mix Her Spit Up' When Her Lip's Lock
Look-Around All These Jokes'll 'Put-u-Down' Like Sick Dogs
Wrestling? Think Shes a Fan? Naw She Only Likes It When She gets 'Pinned On Her Back'
Think u a Girl So i Wont-Fight? i'll give u 'Clothes-Line' Like Im Rinsing My Pants
Bitches Dicks Get The Blame, They Cant Handle u Tho Ur Nympho & Strange
U Wanted a Porn Tape But They couldn't Take '15 Minutes Of Fame'

Hahahaha My boy said that was harsh ^ lol dont take it serious



This is like ... Venus Vs Mars. ahaah

[bullet_boy46]

, shit gotta reply to sday, ima BRB with my vote

[FAME]

naw I'm just kidding.
The wrestling line and the last line had me extremely laughing out loud, I hope I didn't wake the people around me It was really nice to battle someone who I consider a vet in the battles section. People don't sleep on this shit

[Spyder]

and Roc ftw
vote roc

[bullet_boy46]

sorry but roc raped this

[FAME]

Is it too much to ask for someone to give me a few tips on what I wrote?

[classthe_king]

Vote roc obviously. And fame try to use multis in your verse. And try to come up with some punches that will make the reader remember your verse. All your stuff was pretty generic and mostly throw away rhymes.