CorrosionCover vs mdemaz (A tie)

[CorrosionCover]

10 lines

Flipping/Feeding allowed

Mdemaz get back to class, you'r flipping bad bars, you will begin to see stars when I knock you out,
Choke you hard, till the next cords drop, make your eyes pop out like a guenni pig smashed down,
Now, he's supposed to be from Australia coast ,but you'r shivering like you've eaten a malaria toast,
A roast turkey, a boosted out ferbie I feel like fighting a baby, maybe start playing a pictionary,
Please lend him over a dictionary, and take a ferry to run away, I've killed more than Bloody Mary,
Hey, wait heard your "Still don't give a fuck" cover, man you sound like you've done a power hour,
A narrow escape i gave you in the cypher, I borrow a cape to down you as a psyker, an undertaker ?
All I see is a baker, wishing he had a girl or a place in which he could take her, disorientated ?
Fine, becouse I already made your metal band evaporated, disintegrated, you never know hoe, how ?
BLOW ! Take the shot, I'll rape your corpse as soon as it starts to rot, photoshop won't even hide it,

Line 3 - He's from Australia
Line 4/5 - He made no impression on me with his lyrics in battle cypher
Line 5 - Checked his account on youtube and his "Still don't give a fuck" cover
Line 9 - He's got a metal band or at least friends who got a metal band
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[mdemaz]

That was good lol. iight man here goes..

Your all talk you'll get stalked by a chalk fork I know nothing about ya might as well end this ya whore
your one big snore you saying you'll rape my corpse? I'm the raging zombie in this battle and your just a baby cattle turned into straws of pork maybe apples ya I'm from australia, poland is like gay seattle
ready to get eaten steady now or you'll get beaten your like a wet beacon floating around the sea
you'll be face down under me drinking my tasty pee I'm not racist G
yeah I covered eminem done it in 5 minutes that's more power then your hour ya would of taken then?
fighting a baby? undertaker baker faker what the fuck are you saying your making no sense
you just met your maker you'll regret trying to take ...uh
what the fuck are we even doin' mate huh? Just cause I have a metal band ya think I'm a masturbater?
I made no impression on you cause the battle was won before it started to raise up.

Line 1: I don't know about your music so I insinuated the fact I would stop rapping.
Line 2: Responding to your raping corpse line by saying I'm already dead.
Line 3: Your from poland (I've been there btw!)
Line 6: Responding with the fact it took 5 minutes to record not an hour.
Line 7: Mocking your random words.
Line 9: Made up a insult for you about having a metal band and called myself a masturbater. ((ol.)
Line 10: Responding to the cypher battles we had saying I won before they even started.
That was fun lol. Feedback please.

[CorrosionCover]

Thanks for battle man. Now let's wait for votes

I should have explained the power hour line

Power hour is a drinking game in which you drink a small amount of beer every minute for 1 hour,
it meant your voice would be dead after this game

[solara]

really liked ur first punch mdemaz
u both are good ! keeep it up!!

[mdemaz]

I guess we could call it A tie..I really couldn't really get anything outta my head at the time..

[CorrosionCover]

I guess we will have to call a tie, becouse this section is dead and no 1 even wants to look at it beside us ....

[mdemaz]

Everyone's on holidays probably...We should bump this tomorrow or the next day..
It's all good.

[Scrubz]

very close, both did well, i hate reading raps tho! but i gotta give the nod to my boy md! goood shit guys!

[CorrosionCover]

Let's call a tie for this then, although hope to fight you other (not holiday ^^) time.

Feedback always appraciated !

Btw. I also rather listen to rap than read it but.... I got no fuckin' idea about recording and even less fuckin' idea about creating beats....

Btw. 2

Metal rulez. I like AC/DC (Australia ), Black Sabbath, Guns n Roses for example xD

[mdemaz]

Lot's of respect for AC\DC they pioneered it all...

[Wreck]

Guys you really need to look back at your verses and make sure they rhyme, cause none of these did, they were one liners each that didn't rhyme. Nevertheless, I vote for Corrosion, he had more and better personal insults, it flowed a little bit better then mdemaz did, even though both of you had really long, stretched verses. Just trying to give honest feedback there. So my vote goes to Corrosion.

And everybody's probably on Vacation for christmas break. just wait a few more days.

[CorrosionCover]

Hahaha thanks for feedback Wreckless, but ffs write your own battle with me slacker

[Wreck]

Hahaha thanks for feedback Wreckless, but ffs write your own battle with me slacker

I'm on that now bro

[mdemaz]

Yeah I fucked my cut up haha..

[CorrosionCover]

Lol anyways it was fun we may do rebattle if you want mdemaz