Flamez Vs. Bar (Vote Now)

by **Flamez** » Feb 21st, '07, 22:01

5 votes to win, 3-0 KO, 8 lines

i'll post my drop right now..

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Feb 21st, '07, 22:08

here comes the fire-man with a fire-arm called a lyrical forty seven,
yo shorty heaven give me a call this guy thinks he's a star of basketball,
i scar dont stall, you cant rap at all, no flow emotion go show devotion,
to ya net-girls, you aint a threat-girl , you never had a wet-girl,
im so personel im turning into you now im burning into view
heres your interview, what your name, oh your a flame, fiery name,
its a dam shame you aint a man, blame you, coz i blame ya,
i haunt ya n taunt ya everywere, sitting singing veronika over there,

by **Flamez** » Feb 21st, '07, 22:23

gonna gobble you up make you swallow these conspicuous words
flamez bout to spread burning you splittin you up into three-thirds
i'm killin' you like birds melting you poor tastin' candybar
leavin' ya face full of scars in embarassement i'm a rapstar
you gonna need cpr once you paralyzed out of breath
from these rhymin' lines dropped u dyin' a painful death
this violent vicous death leave paralyzed with cardiac arrest
best of the best just ate you up flamez just left ya oppressed

vote now...

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » Feb 21st, '07, 22:56

FLOW-both very good but this one goes to bar
STRUCTURE-bar
PUNCHES-bar
MULTIES-bar
RHYMES-bar
VOCAB-flamez
COMPLEXITY-flamez
NAMEPLAY-none
OTHER-enjoy bars more

6-2.....(one is missin cuz of NONE) :sweating:

vote goes to bar

sorry flamez

keep it up :flower:

by **Flamez** » Feb 21st, '07, 23:00

well thats 1 -0 for bar..

mine sucked :sweating:

lol...that was good bar better than mine...

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » Feb 21st, '07, 23:07

Flamez wrote:well thats 1 -0 for bar..

mine sucked lol...that was good bar better than mine...

dont get dishearted....urs was pretty good....just some more practise

by **Flamez** » Feb 21st, '07, 23:11

em50inem wrote:
Flamez wrote:well thats 1 -0 for bar..

mine sucked lol...that was good bar better than mine...

dont get dishearted....urs was pretty good....just some more practise

smh i'm not getting dishearted...only said it sucked cuz its the truth...but yea i know practice is good lol..

by **BaZZ** » Feb 21st, '07, 23:19

FLOW-Bar
STRUCTURE-Tie
PUNCHES-Bar
MULTIES-Bar
RHYMES-Bar
VOCAB-Tie
COMPLEXITY-Flamez
NAMEPLAY-none
OTHER-Flamez (1st battle is against bars? wow)

Overall: Bar

good job flamez, altho bar's was much better, urs was very good for a first battle... :happy:

by **Flamez** » Feb 21st, '07, 23:24

2 - 0 for bar

well thanx...

more votes...

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Feb 22nd, '07, 00:08

good verse flamez :worship:

@ em50inem @ slmm_880 , "oh your a flame , fiery name" , his creen name is flamez , that equals very simpl nameplay :sweating:

thx for taking the time to vote :worship:

edit: flames candybar line is nameplay aswel...my names BAR :sweating:

by **Enimee** » Feb 22nd, '07, 02:13

NO kill urselfs

no hate bar heres my opinion tho

u had no real punches bar and most of ur stuff was pretty wack

although simple and straight to the point FLAMEZ was waaaay more enjoyable

easy vote here

but still heres the break down

FLOW-Flamez
STRUCTURE-Flamez
PUNCHES-Flamez
MULTIES-BAR
RHYMES-BAR
VOCAB-Flamez
COMPLEXITY-Flamez
NAMEPLAY-BAR
OTHER-Flamez

PS: "repetition isnt ideal for battlin

its a dam shame you aint a man, blame you, coz i blame ya,

you gonna need cpr once you paralyzed out of breath
from these rhymin' lines dropped u dyin' a painful death
this violent vicous death leave paralyzed with cardiac arrest

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Feb 22nd, '07, 02:17

Enimee wrote:NO kill urselfs

no hate bar heres my opinion tho

u had no real punches bar and most of ur stuff was pretty wack

although simple and straight to the point FLAMEZ was waaaay more enjoyable

easy vote here

but still heres the break down

FLOW-Flamez
STRUCTURE-Flamez
PUNCHES-Flamez
MULTIES-BAR
RHYMES-BAR
VOCAB-Flamez
COMPLEXITY-Flamez
NAMEPLAY-BAR
OTHER-Flamez

PS: "repetition isnt ideal for battlin
its a dam shame you aint a man, blame you, coz i blame ya,

you gonna need cpr once you paralyzed out of breath
from these rhymin' lines dropped u dyin' a painful death
this violent vicous death leave paralyzed with cardiac arrest

wtf you shouting about :confusion:

the vote counts, but come on man, no punches, i had 1 bar without a punch thats it, i had personel punches strong punch with veronika....but w/e your opinion

and wtf is the repition quotes your shouting about, i didnt repeat shit

i thought you stopped being a prik :unsure:

an guy wit hald a brain knows my stuff had punches and wasnt wack :unsure:

vote counts 2-1, but i had to say that

by **Enimee** » Feb 22nd, '07, 02:21

dude im not bein a dik sorry if i offended urs just didnt appeal to me...i didnt understand ur "veronika" punch so don laugh at me on that and like ur punches were exsistant but a lil weakish ....so yeah Flamez got my vote

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Feb 22nd, '07, 02:23

Enimee wrote:dude im not bein a dik sorry if i offended urs just didnt appeal to me...i didnt understand ur "veronika" punch so don laugh at me on that and like ur punches were exsistant but a lil weakish ....so yeah Flamez got my vote

w/e

more votes

by **Inches** » Feb 22nd, '07, 02:24

Enimee wrote:

u had no real punches bar and most of ur stuff was pretty wack

like your shit?

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