sudhanshueminem Vs ~pratik~

[~pratik~]

no fam o religion diss

8 bars

2 rounds

24 hrs ta spit

sudhanshueminem goes 1st ...

[sudhanshueminem]

okeis dude i wud go 1st

but i am buzy now

i wud spit 2mmorow

[~pratik~]

aiight ..

g'luck ..

[sudhanshueminem]

kid, get a real JOB that don't meet trshady's DESCRPTION, high-TECH-RAPPIN wasn't a doctor's PRESCRIPTION!
like stock market gamblin be a broker's ADDICTION, ima leave ur industry BROKE (broken) seekin FINANCIAL SUBSCRIPTION!!//



anotha ***** here wantin 2 get killed
apologies 2 his homies coz ima destroy dis dude u help build/
quick gemme a tranquilizer...bitch's pussy needs b filled
wonder how i win??..coz mah shit is willed


yo check out ma verse,its worse dan a curse,worse dan d ***** who calls himself fred durst/
worse dan d moment d fuckin hell will burst....worse dan d gay who TURNED U ON night first//


ur a fuckin disgrace,a faggot wid no lace,a worm wid no face,a sprinter wid no pace/
a lawyer wid no case,a lump wid no space,fuck it man...u aint nuthin but an asshole wid no base//


You eat wack n now ur DUMPIN IT? ya wouldnt reach me if ya swing JUMP~N~HIT ... I RUN~THE~PIT u couldnt fuck me if u had a WONDER~CLIT coz im THUNDER~BITCH u can predict the weather but ur still UNDER~IT//(damn!!)




this is real lyrical skill and grace...
u aint got da will to face my killa pace..
id beat ya even if my spit was jus tabs and space.....
u jus another FAGGOT ASS face,,
to me ull alwayz be a fukin disgrace,..

everytime i spit rhymes i commit crime and felony..
that makes me a madder criminal than ull eva be..


no beefs

respect

peace

[~pratik~]

k .. gud spit .. ima spit .. gimme sumtym

[~pratik~]

ma punchiles'll hit u lyk [color=#0000FF]mike-tyson
so pray hard bitch cuz u might-die-soon~..//

uz anotha "rookie-bitch" tryna get "nice-spit" "filthy-git" yer "shit-aint-legit"
fuck around here nd getcha "ass-kicked" cuz kid' defeatin meh is a "myth"..//

ma rhymes fly high lyk a kite nd yer "shit b-in-basements"
ima burn this bitch cuz am "spitt-in-flames~"..//

yew aint michael jackson, u cant ~fuck-with-this-kid~
this pure gangsta shit u cant handdle this ~yo-bettah-forfeit~..//

u dun gt respected in d hood evn whn ya playin ~grand-theft-auto~
whack mcz , like you i juzt chew em ~lyk-tobacoo~..//

uz a spouse ov ~elton john~ , 5 barz nd i ripped off yo ~cojones~
ill end yo so called carrer nd clean yo up lyk ~trojans~..//

ma rapx brng excitement lyk a "tape-ov-porn"
battlin with me ill leave this bithc "raped-nd-torned"

battlin with me , ill leave u fucked up nd "stoned"
all yo hoes d same , ill remember u as the one that i "owned"..//[/color]

Peace ~

[~pratik~]

vote up TRS ..

[Shady's_Back]

I vote sudhanshueminem but it was a close decision.

[~pratik~]

0-1 .. upppin fo votez

[C-Game]

FLOW - prat
STRUCTURE prat ( sudhan work on ur structure bro )
PUNCHES - sudhan
MULTIES - prat
RHYMES -tie
VOCAB - sudhan
COMPLEXITY - prat.. edged it
NAMEPLAY - none
OTHER( sudhans metas were kool )

5 - 4 ( prat ... )

good job both of u...

keep climbin da ladder of TR>...


both got kick ass potentialllll and new styles ..

p.s i dont like colorin but anyway..

welcome to TR

[IceAxe]

ok....umm... not sure what to say here.

First, I would've appreciated something that was close to correct spelling, it would make the read easier.

Anyway, the vote:


Structure: pratik
Flow: pratik
Rhymes: sudhanhueminem or how ever the fuck you spell it
Multis: pratik, but they were very simple
Punches: The punches looked like somethin that was tryin to re-enact 8 Mile or some shit. But pratik's were better in my eyes
Personals: None?
Nameplay: not here
Vocab: Simple from both, tie
Other: tie

5-4 to pratik

and some of this shit looks like it was jacked from another forum or somethin, but that's just me

[~pratik~]

@ c-game

lol .. aiight .. i wont color ma rhymes frm nw ..:P

@ice axe

u dun gt respected in d hood evn whn ya playin ~grand-theft-auto~
whack mcz , like you i juzt chew em ~lyk-tobacoo~..//

^^ this bars a personal .. GTA >>> hiz fav game ..

[Tash8]

@ice axe

u dun gt respected in d hood evn whn ya playin ~grand-theft-auto~
whack mcz , like you i juzt chew em ~lyk-tobacoo~..//

^^ this bars a personal .. GTA >>> hiz fav game ..

what the fuck?

[Shady's_Back]

@ice axe

u dun gt respected in d hood evn whn ya playin ~grand-theft-auto~
whack mcz , like you i juzt chew em ~lyk-tobacoo~..//

^^ this bars a personal .. GTA >>> hiz fav game ..

what the fuck?

Dunno lol

[~pratik~]

wht???