Bar Vs Mcbryde

[Sykin]

Bar's verse:

mcbyde back again fucking wid me,
you need to learn you wont beat me ,
-----Weird, this bar doesn't rhyme...virtually no punch, not creative...1/5

coz my style better than yours,
simple as that, mine makes ppl stop and think ,
-----Eh...again, self-glorification vs. throwing an actual punch...1/5

yours topple ppl over the edge, takes them to the brink,
and i mean the brink of death, topping thereselve when they hear you shit,
-----Okay, a punch...nothin' hard hitting or creative...3/5

one guy heard it and ran so fast he choked on his own spit ,
and when you spit, your mouth looks like a 80 year old clit,
-----Gross, not creative, but gross...decent punch...4/5

and your words smell worse, than an out of date hurse.
gonni end this quick, coz we all know you shit ,
-----Marginal punch, bar ends weak...2/5

a dont need to prove it again , you a chicken , get back in yer pen ,
get back to your farm , you owner gonni pull an egg out,
-----Part of the bar rhymes, other part doesn't...weak punch...2/5

then ill by your ass at a check out, time for you to get out,
get out this game before you get tamed,
-----Meh, not feelin' this...think about how you could have said that more creatively....1/5

coz your raps are like a transexual , Just lame ,
now mcbryde dont cry , coz you just got layed down , Bye-Bye
-----Better, still falls short on the weight of the punch....2/5

Bar: 16/40


McBryde's verse:

o you think yoo a rapper becouse you no the wurd hook
all your fuckin songs are text book
-----Marginal punch at best...2/5

stop braggin you got your deal by a flook
a just need to dump you in the water then frow you a fish hook
-----No creativity, statement of the obvious...2/5

you must be mad a been rappin about a week an you are getin overtook
i naw mine are better but these ppl can have a look
-----No punch at all, really........1/5

im allredy beeter an i just began
stop layin to thes ppl you aint a man
-----No punch period.....0/5

yous a wrinkly old gran
sitten in an old rokin chair with an empty beer can
----again, so what? why should we care? Where's tha heat on tha punch?...1/5

a knok you off that chair with any hand
your not a rapper you shoud join a rock band
-----Blah..........1/5

when yoo have listend to all my shit your wrist would have been tanned
i no my name is startin to expand
-----the rhymes were better in this bar, but a far cry from a decent punch...2/5

wen im dun yool need to burry you head in the sand
well thats what i demand an thats what i had planed
-----Weak punch...1/5

McBryde: 10/40


Bar had 16, McBryde had 10...

Here's a category breakdown...

Flow-Bar
Punches- Bar
Personals- None
Multis- None
Creativity- None
Wordplay- None
Humor- Bar

Overall Vote: Bar

Not a lot of strong punches in this battle...lots of self-glorification from both, with little actually directed at each other...The essence of it was there, but it didn't hit hard at all, nothin' to make people go "Ooooooh"...the only reaction I had was on Bar's eighty year-old clit line...This is a Shady Forum, just think about how Em words shit....It's creative as fuck, and makes tha crowds go "Dag", or "Ooooooh shit"....I would work to try to be as complex as you can...Keep ya heads up and keep doin' ya thang.

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thanx for voting man appreciate the time toko over it again we both aint battle rappers just the fact i got 4/5 for something makes em ahppy lol thx

im 3-0 up