IceAxe187 vs Tash8 -Tash8 Wins 3-0 KO
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by James R. » May 6th, '07, 04:28
I'll Deflate your Fate with Wicked Plates 'n' Laugh at'dem Disses,
because Half your Disses are piss, and the other Half are Misses.
Average punch, decent to start out with, should have started stronger since you're only goin 6 lines
3/5
Your a Fatass Loafer have Bad Ass Oder, like Track Grass Molded
No I don't like you, I thought I Told Her? maybe when your Older!
Molded and Older doesn't rhyme that well which takes a lot from a punch that could have been ok since you started off kinda good with the multies in the 1st line of this couple.
2/5
Ice Axe, tries to Slice Back, at his families Diet Packs, Pipe Flasks,
Smokin to get these White Trash, guys not girls, if you Might Ask!
This was a little better, the multies were there for the most part, not really feelin the punch, but the 1st line of this part was pretty decent
3/5
Score- 8/15
ice-axe slice-slaps, stikes-at light-fags forth-right-snap with more-might-rap
you cant write-that tight-crap cant sight-that, eyes got a slight-crack
all these multies aren't necessary, they're like a smoke screen because aside from some random shit talking you're not really saying anything
1/5
this place is my house, get maced and dried out erase your eyes doused
i'll win this race, why doubt? rhymes laced with applied clout
Better, not as many multies, better punch, nothing personal to it as far as I can see though so it's not as effective, but it's better than the 1st 2 lines
2/5
if you threw a curve i'd hit, convinced that i served this bitch
observe the 6 against whom you had the nerve to spit
Hahaha best bar of the battle right here, nice punch, got a little personal. nice
4/5
Score- 7/15
Neither verse was amazing, but Tash was a little more consistent. The flow was a little better in Ice's verse, but the multies with lack of punches really brought it down from the level it could have been.
Vote- Tash[/u][/i]
because Half your Disses are piss, and the other Half are Misses.
Average punch, decent to start out with, should have started stronger since you're only goin 6 lines
3/5
Your a Fatass Loafer have Bad Ass Oder, like Track Grass Molded
No I don't like you, I thought I Told Her? maybe when your Older!
Molded and Older doesn't rhyme that well which takes a lot from a punch that could have been ok since you started off kinda good with the multies in the 1st line of this couple.
2/5
Ice Axe, tries to Slice Back, at his families Diet Packs, Pipe Flasks,
Smokin to get these White Trash, guys not girls, if you Might Ask!
This was a little better, the multies were there for the most part, not really feelin the punch, but the 1st line of this part was pretty decent
3/5
Score- 8/15
ice-axe slice-slaps, stikes-at light-fags forth-right-snap with more-might-rap
you cant write-that tight-crap cant sight-that, eyes got a slight-crack
all these multies aren't necessary, they're like a smoke screen because aside from some random shit talking you're not really saying anything
1/5
this place is my house, get maced and dried out erase your eyes doused
i'll win this race, why doubt? rhymes laced with applied clout
Better, not as many multies, better punch, nothing personal to it as far as I can see though so it's not as effective, but it's better than the 1st 2 lines
2/5
if you threw a curve i'd hit, convinced that i served this bitch
observe the 6 against whom you had the nerve to spit
Hahaha best bar of the battle right here, nice punch, got a little personal. nice
4/5
Score- 7/15
Neither verse was amazing, but Tash was a little more consistent. The flow was a little better in Ice's verse, but the multies with lack of punches really brought it down from the level it could have been.
Vote- Tash[/u][/i]
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