flow - edge
multies - edge
rhymes - edge
personals -2sday
punches - none i thought
wordplay - none
nameplay - none
edge gets this one
EdgeIm so hot, I walked through hell and I felt cold
Battle u? this kid is only thirteen years old
I almost feel guilty, beatin on this
juvenileHe sayin imma be wack, hes in
true denialWhile I smile, realize imma become a
child abuserHes fucken with his elders, plus im a
wild drug userSmash u like I smash my cruiser, after to
much to drinkI smoked to
much to think, I still beat him in a blink
Leave u running like a sink, I blade u like a skating rink/ not a good punch
Im valuable like a mink, me and u just don’t link/ not good one either
we will never be in sync, stick to pop like N’Sync/ you rhymed in sinc with N'sync...
Fuck with Edge and ur gunna see the mountains brink
i saw weak punches, NO personals, no wordplay or nameplay, the bolded are your only multies
2sDayMan please just stick to the puffing and blazing,
Cuz looking up how to rap and rhyme on Bing,/ doesnt rhyme that well as only the "ing" rhyme
Wont
help enough, so
yelp and puff, while your living,/ your using internal multies
And just serve me my entree, how bout a suflee,
Before I get you fired, Why did you drop that tray,
Fucking waiter, see ya later, i'll be in college,
Gaining knowledge to not be a waiter, like Mr.Edge,/ doesnt rhyme that well with college
I'm only thirteen, But a G, a fiend, a rhyming machine,
That has seen, more shit than Edge while he serves fresh sardine,
I'm a true MC, as you see, The Edge is shaking he wants to flee,
To the casting call for Glee, Undeniably the gayest show on T.V,/ has nothing to do with anything
Fitting for him, well im done roasting, Now he wont fuck with me,
i so some personals, so at least your going to his profile and using it against him
gotta use more multies at the end of your lines, and make things rhyme more directly.
use wordplay to make punches harder, and use his name agaist him
you guys are both getting there, vote Edge
