Tash & iceaxe vs. DJParker & Enimee [3-0 Tash/iceaxe

by **Tash8** » Apr 14th, '07, 20:01

just a question why is there 2 rhymes cat?

by **C-Game** » Apr 14th, '07, 20:09

sorry it was nameplay.........
its fixed....

damn gimme some props for dat long ass vote :angry:

by **Tash8** » Apr 14th, '07, 20:12

I was going to but first i was gonna make sure it's final draft :tounge2:

yea thanks a lot, and i'm sttill confused about my struct, should i make it shorter and shit?

so you voted ice and i right?

2-0! vote

thanks a lot c-game

sends flowers.

by **C-Game** » Apr 14th, '07, 20:21

i know ur lines are equal...
try to get it a lil shorter....

but make sure da syllable count is slightly even in a line......

wat i do is i write to a beat ... so i know it flows well and da strucutre is maintained...

and make sure da LOOK is there in text

coz in audio for example if u say da line

ur a G.A.Y
ur a WEAK-FRAIL-GUY

notice da abv 2 lines...it has da same number of syllables but on Text it looks lil off in structure..so try to maintain both...

oh and a syllable is like this

ex:

dictionary - DIC - TION - ARY (3)
C-Game - C-Game (2)
below - BE- LOW ( 2 )

got it???

by **Tash8** » Apr 14th, '07, 20:22

OH, i get it know thanks a lot c-game...

by **IceAxe** » Apr 15th, '07, 03:24

still 2-0... votes please!

by **Enimee** » Apr 15th, '07, 17:41

i wanted to do summin nice with my last 2 lines like start off parkers drop where he wud have a lne then i wud then he wud then i wud like this

Parker:
Enimee:

Parker:
Enimee:

then he wud finish hiz drop our combined lines eash makin a bar so he wud have 4 more barz to go and my last bar wuda been there....chemistry wuz ma goal but he dropped before i cud let him kno i tried to pm him but it aint work o wellz

by **C-Game** » Apr 15th, '07, 18:32

yea i was wonderin abt wat ur surprise was gonna be

gud concept

by **Tash8** » Apr 15th, '07, 18:39

sorry the parker fucked it up for you lol

by **Tash8** » Apr 16th, '07, 05:33

by **DJ.Parker** » Apr 16th, '07, 09:53

Tash8 wrote:sorry the parker fucked it up for you lol

is it my fault? damn!!!!! lol

@ enimee. I was wondering what u were gonna do....I dropped cos I havnt got a pm from u.

Newayz peeps vote!!!!!!!!

by **Global** » Apr 16th, '07, 10:03

ill vote tommore for sure

by **Tash8** » Apr 17th, '07, 06:11

by **BaZZ** » Apr 17th, '07, 23:03

FLOW: Enimee/DJParker (tash's flow was really bad)
STRUCTURE: Enimee/DJParker
PUNCHES: Tash8/Iceaxe
RHYMES: Tash8/Iceaxe
MULTIES: Tash8/Iceaxe
VOCAB: Tash8/Iceaxe
COMPLEXITY: Enimee/DJParker
NAMEPLAY: Enimee/DJParker
OTHER: Tash8/Iceaxe (enimee only had 4 bars)

O/A: Tash8 and Iceaxe

by **Tash8** » Apr 17th, '07, 23:34

^ thanks i think we win KO 3-0 right?

Tash & iceaxe vs. DJParker & Enimee [3-0 Tash/iceaxe

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