Official Rap Battle Tournament. (first round)

[Wic Kid]

not gonna like i didnt like this battle at all,

i honestly got Wic in every catagory, but heres the thing Wic yours wasnt that great i never dropped my jaw i never even giggled

on my vote you move on idk bout the other 2, so come harder next time
and drama if you move on step your shit up as well

just trying to help you guys and make this a dope tourney

vote Wic

Thanks, guys. This is like my 2nd battle since I got here, so... I was never good at this battlin stuff, eventhough I write shit almost every day (but never battle rap). Its probably cuz I lack hard punchlines, idk.

Anyway, thanks for the votes, dudes.

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COLEON IS NOT DOING IT? BUT I FINISHED MY VERSE.

He said he was going to do it though...

[Wic Kid]

COLEON IS NOT DOING IT? BUT I FINISHED MY VERSE.

He said he was going to do it though...

That shouldnt matter anymore, he didnt send it on time. You won.

Congratz

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i thought I was...

motherfucker, deadline has been and gone. u had like 3 days to do it.

... Okay, well at least let's see what his verse is and compare it to mine. It'll be a fake one... I'm really curious about what he brought to the table.

[Le Tunisien]

i like the idea of xray, choose one of the defeated people to go VS "the left over guy" lol cuz like he said,4 people have to get knocked out while this other one doesnt challenge anyone, thats why i think good idea though

wat Do u guys think?

[Drama Setter]

not gonna like i didnt like this battle at all,

i honestly got Wic in every catagory, but heres the thing Wic yours wasnt that great i never dropped my jaw i never even giggled

on my vote you move on idk bout the other 2, so come harder next time
and drama if you move on step your shit up as well

just trying to help you guys and make this a dope tourney

vote Wic

Aight , that's what's up , yeah I didnt spend much time for my shit tnx anyway

and yeah Congratz Wik-Kid

[Relapse.LP]

i like the idea of xray, choose one of the defeated people to go VS "the left over guy" lol cuz like he said,4 people have to get knocked out while this other one doesnt challenge anyone, thats why i think good idea though

wat Do u guys think?

no, gonna pull out of a hat.

DId the Yah-hah battle finish? People will get confused and these battles won't even finish.

[Relapse.LP]

good battle man....looks like you went through a WHOLE lot lol

I did some homework.

[Le Tunisien]

i like the idea of xray, choose one of the defeated people to go VS "the left over guy" lol cuz like he said,4 people have to get knocked out while this other one doesnt challenge anyone, thats why i think good idea though

wat Do u guys think?

no, gonna pull out of a hat.

you gonna pull out of a hat names of defeated people?

hope it 'll be me

[MC Anonymous]

coleon

My bars jam like smuckers bro, an though Scotty plans ta fuckus both
ya Marfan* lines, long and weak, while I heat physiques like undercoats
speakin on his struggled flow, makin Stans crazy when he fuckin talkin
Watch me do it too, make Relapse leak, let's go to the Slums & Boxden*
bustin rawness, flawless, keep it gunnin, son'n the best contenda
cause my "mine"* is stronger than anyone up in West Virginia
bustin it in splender, hope you take critique when this dog reppin
take heade im not steppin, kept handin you fake Feats. like prostetics*
spray heat, i talk weapons, cuz it's past fate if you face C
a bad day, so stay keen, cause you stay on bad breaks like James Dean*

*causes you to be tall, lanky but have a weak heart
*obvious for a Stan, Relapse leaked on Slum Boxden
*mines collapse here/my mind as in brain
*gave him features i never mad good on
*James Dean died in a car crash

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Your hair has too much "Filler" so you didn't "Make the Cut"... your face does fright/
"Bank-rupt" so you ghost-write undope-rhymes; no one will "Pay a Buck" for Grade-F rhymes/

Obsessed with "Sylla-BULL" shit; Syllable "Satist"? Please, you're no "Biblical-Surgeon"/
More like "Spyder-Sadist", but couldn't "Squash" him... Now you're a "Syllable-Virgin"/

Won-tourney one, what'll cost-your-defeat is "Sophomore-Jinx" like "Wizards of Waverly"/
He's a sinner with the "Fakest-Ink" like FBI investigations; not even an expert in "Catering"/

I "play-word" like "reverse" puppeteers; the Truth-Hurts, it "Cuts-Ya-Ear" like "Buccaneers"/
Everything you say "Out-of-Context" like "French musketeers" faced with a sudden fear/

"Scared-to-Record" like a "Pussy-Criminal"... "Whiter-than-Graves" and "Requires-a-Shave?/
"Tired-of-Fakes" so 'Will the real Coleon please stand up?'; so retarded you'd "Fire-a-Slave"/


Line 1: http://www.imagecross.com/11/image-host ... 09_001.jpg < A pic of Coleon.
Line 2: viewtopic.php?f=9&t=69669 < Ghost-write topic.
Line 3: Peep his "Syllable" series of verses, especially "Syllable Satist"... link provided below...
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=69869
Line 4:

Spiders do no harm (except for the poisonous ones), so why try to kill 'em...

why kill them? because to them I'm God and they're creepy and shit so I decide they're all dead if a shoe is with in reach

And peep his battle with Spyder.
viewtopic.php?f=26&t=59719&hilit=coleon
Line 5: Wizards of Waverly is a Disney show about high-school witches.
Line 6: Fake ink = crime and shitty raps (pens)... Catering means "Delivery".
Line 7: 17th century pirates.
Line 8: Self-explanatory... Musketeers are English.
Line 9: Doesn't want to record his raps. Second part of line refers to his nationality and hair and just peep his pic.
http://www.imagecross.com/11/image-host ... 09_001.jpg
Line 10: Lol.

Sorry for the long explanation of my verse below, but it gotta be included.

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FLOW Relapse
STRUCTURE Coleon
PUNCHES Relapse
MULTIES Relapse
RHYMES Relapse
VOCAB Relapse
COMPLEXITY Relapse
NAMEPLAY Neither
OTHER i enjoyed the syllable personals a whole lot.
Vote to Relapse.

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I meant Wic_Kid's battle, my bad.

[Le Tunisien]

no, the defeated ppl will not be returning.

lol then wat names are u talkin about lol, u mean someone will have to do 2 battle in one round even if he won?lol

[Le Tunisien]

no, 5 ppl go through .. i will pick 4 out of a hat, which means they'll be 2 battles, and the last name in the hat goes through automatically on luck.

bahhh doesnt sound right...... returning one of the 4 defeated person would sound better

who aggrees???

[Wic Kid]

no, 5 ppl go through .. i will pick 4 out of a hat, which means they'll be 2 battles, and the last name in the hat goes through automatically on luck.

Scotty, have I mentioned how great you look?...

[Spyder]

multies - relapse
personals - relapse
rhymes - relapse
flow - coleon
punches - relapse
strucure - coleon
complexity - relapse
other - relapse

sorry col your ass got whopped man, and you's a red name today
best battle yet.... though still not great

relapse moves on