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Postby MoBrat » Nov 7th, '06, 12:58

i'll exceed everyones expectations
radio stations gave me a congratulations
they loved my creations
i have many variations of observations
my dads on a bunch of medications
a million and 1 motivations
with all my violations the police will get lost in their investigations
so many obligations they had 2 start negotiations
turn the beat up till u feel the vibrations


(Im a noob this is my first post. What do yall think?)
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Postby Rain Matrix » Nov 7th, '06, 18:28

I'm what you can't Handle a Handfull all they do is Ramble/
you risk facing me that's a Gamble I'll light you up like a Candle//

fool I'm the Breath of Air that Extinguish's You so Smolder/
your in Time to be Left Rare like your English Is New it's Over//

Fold your Hand your out of Luck Kid I Slap you in the Face like a Razor/
your Old and Planned to be Destructed I Track your Pace like a Laser//

I'm too far Ahead I don't care how this is Read you already Fled/
so take your Med go to Bed and dream of beating me Instead//

I don't Keep Fiends I K.O. them into Sleep Screams/
I Delete Scenes with Repeat means to destroy their Beef Dreams//

VOTE ON MY BATTLES it's RAINTIME
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Postby ShadyGD26 » Nov 13th, '06, 05:03

out here its bogus wit this guy gettin jumped for his wallet//
an then the drama pops as the homiez kno cuz they saw it//
they start tweakin "man I shoulda did sumthin I feel like I turned my back"//
how frustratin is it to kno its the past an u didnt react//
but iz cool cuz we got the address an what-not//
now its jus who does what an then the plot//
"aiight we got him an him they the back-up"//
"an u right u remember him u do the smack-up"//
"u look out for the cops remember...versity,city,sheriff,state"//
"give a holler then split we'll already be gone dont wait"//
an then the plan is hatched an the crew is ready//
this punk about to be snatched an his ass all dead G//
so don't fuck with us cuz we family//
personally I got a violent personality//
an then we got the thinkers, an of course the thugs//
the linebacker homiez, the broz, an those who sell drugz//
so we 15 deep dont fuck with this shyt//
ya ass gon leave wit at least no wrists bitch//
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rap

Postby Sleepy » Nov 16th, '06, 18:42

are u listening to the words that i SPIT
i know i WRIT this SHIT
still im giving u THRILLS
im class and getting BILLS
ur as high as the HILLS
thinkin u can rap like ME
well u cant so u betta just let it BE
SEE,im sick and tired waiting for the RE-UP
stop listening to em keep n listening to ME
AIGHT,now that i set u RIGHT
u say to urself that im TIGHT
i think i MIGHT have made u see the LIGHT
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Postby MoBrat » Nov 16th, '06, 18:53

im in control play u like a xbox console
steal ur soul the same as a bullet hole
while im on patrol its over like ur attention span
u rap like a cave man the second i began it was over got a 4 leaf clover in my hand
i dont demand respect just wanna connect
even if its a select few someone they look to
2 get through their day my word play goes all the way
i put my self on display dont betray
with what u spray cause u'll get hit by a stray
i see through u like a x-ray
today i dont know what 2 say so i'll cut 2 it
i quit heres my rhyme book go ahead n thumb through it cause ever bit u spit is worse then the last go ahead n harass
cause u awlays talk about the past
i'll put ur body in a cast real fast if u dont watch what u talk about
Totally Random But Meh :D
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Postby Enimee » Nov 16th, '06, 22:58

here i come bitch and you know what i got
its an automatic weapon to hit you in the blind spot
Baltimore's finest up and comin
you better duck and start runnin
there is no rapper even half as lethal
one rhyme is all it really takes to defeat you
but here i come with half of 14 bars
im gonna have to mix these with ours
my metaphors keep you half asleep in Psychosis
havin all your homeys claimin im the dopest
on my dick your chick is strokin
after this shit like jimmy smith you'll be
you beatin me bitch, well thats a fluke
cause my shit hits you like fallout from a nuke

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Postby 604pn0i » Nov 19th, '06, 05:36

*not directed to anyone, but if shit pops off...*

all you fools spittin is amateur
i dont havta worry bout this shit, nigga dats for-sure
ye im back and i know what im spittin
read my text, and yur brain be splittin
i dare yall to call me on this,
ill have you all killed, call yur parents and they wont exist

whats this site comin too, kids 13 years old, dont even try and be bold
keep rappen and yur future will unfold, body found dead and cold

haha i love the expression on yur face when you read that multi
half the Gs wont live till 30, RIP, say goodbye to the nulty
this was for you cgame, i still exist man
all these internet G's better be streetsmart, run when you see my black Van
ha, more like the navigator
come up wit somethin better then that...if its not immature
direct it to me, ill verbally slaughter you like papoose
find me in the club sippin gray goose
Disturbing Tha Peace.
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Postby Sleepy » Nov 23rd, '06, 16:45

yall think im SICK any yall who think i aint can suck my DICK
im betta than U cant u see that i spit TRUE ill make u RUE any MISTAKE
AWAKE outta ur DREAMS ur shit aint as good as it SEAMS ill destroy ur ALLIANCE my DEFIANCE is too GOOD as i go through my HOOD everybody
stands up now listen to me FOOl u know i RULE so why u tryin to be COOL
u cant FUCK with me dont RUCK wit me i aint no internet GANGSTA not a MOBSTA either but UR mama SAID im good in BED

*not directed at anyone*
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Postby Inches » Nov 24th, '06, 02:44

molonono1 wrote:yall think im SICK any yall who think i aint can suck my DICK
im betta than U cant u see that i spit TRUE ill make u RUE any MISTAKE
AWAKE outta ur DREAMS ur shit aint as good as it SEAMS ill destroy ur ALLIANCE my DEFIANCE is too GOOD as i go through my HOOD everybody
stands up now listen to me FOOl u know i RULE so why u tryin to be COOL
u cant FUCK with me dont RUCK wit me i aint no internet GANGSTA not a MOBSTA either but UR mama SAID im good in BED

*not directed at anyone*


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Postby Enimee » Nov 24th, '06, 22:53

heh 1 bar is all i need to tear you apart//
punch you in you chest and walk away clenchin your beatin heart//
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Postby Coccoa » Nov 24th, '06, 23:40

Funny thing is, none of u wrote 1 bar. Most wrote 2 or more.
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Postby 604pn0i » Nov 25th, '06, 00:59

Coccoa wrote:Funny thing is, none of u wrote 1 bar. Most wrote 2 or more.


lol i know, but its funner and i get more excersise writing more then 1 bar :D

son i am illegal tender
dont test me man ill have you stripped right outta yur gender
you live in the hood, you never even flipped coke
i flip so hard my fuckin hand broke
sell it straight out on the block
you n yur crew stair b/c i carry a gloc
cut rocks so phat that yur mom cried!
im a OG i stay MOB, dat means i ride


^jus a lil summin, flows pretty nicely too ^
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Postby Enimee » Nov 25th, '06, 01:02

lol i know, but its funner and i get more excersise writing more then 1 bar Big Grin

son i am illegal tender
dont test me man ill have you stripped right outta yur gender
you live in the hood, you never even flipped coke
i flip so hard my fuckin hand broke
sell it straight out on the block
you n yur crew stair b/c i carry a gloc
cut rocks so phat that yur mom cried!
im a OG i stay MOB, dat means i ride


^jus a lil summin, flows pretty nicely too ^



battle ME SON!
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Postby Coccoa » Nov 25th, '06, 01:58

604pn0i wrote:
Coccoa wrote:Funny thing is, none of u wrote 1 bar. Most wrote 2 or more.


lol i know, but its funner and i get more excersise writing more then 1 bar :D


No u dont understand. 2 lines is not 1 bar, thats what i am saying.
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Postby Enimee » Nov 25th, '06, 01:59

yes it is...genius
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