Innovation vs Devil'sAdvocate

[Innovation]

3 bars.

Due 1 hr after check.

[Innovation]

Checking in. Good luck.

[Innovation]

Here's my drop.

I have 3 bars, 6 lines, to send this Advocate to hell and back,
On a written he spits "grammer this" please, we can already tell his wack,
He has "two billion votes of pure intelligence" and yet still can't sell a track,
"HE MAD", that's a fact. This is a clear win, but he'll still argue his point,
I'm looking forward to his long hiatus after he debuts his joint,
I'm done. Let's see if one of his punchlines lands, Advocate, it's crunch-time mayne.

Explanations:
- Adovate to hell and back - going on the "Devil" part of his name
- "grammer this" - in his practice verse drop, he said "i grammer this" which is a grammatical error in itself
- "two billion votes of pure intelligence" - again he says this in his practise verse
- "HE MAD" - he says "you mad" a lot on this forum. "HE MAD" plays on him thinking he can beat me
- "still argue his point" - Devil's Advocate is when someone argues for the sake of it. He's arguing for his win even though he's already lost the battle
- "long hiatus" - saying that it's going downhill and he should just stop
- Last line of the verse - it's crunch-time to see if I'm right about him not being able to rap, and to see if any of his "punches" "land". Not a great line, I know. But it was rushed and I had to pull a multi out somewhere to salvage the last line lol.

Sorry for the long explanations, just before people cast their votes, I want them to know exactly what I was thinking.

Good luck, Advocate!

[Devil'sAdvocate]

iiight man i will drop in a lil

[Devil'sAdvocate]

3 bars is too little son,heres a quick 1.

Out of me hell,you aint gonna make it
thats my motel,im strippin u naked
stop spewing hatred,ur already wasted
OH YOU MAD,nah you sad,awww fuck,too bad
let me get back to my rhyme scheme and lace it
im killing u fag,my theme,embrace it.

[Sir_Machete']

Yeah ya can tell ya both rush the verse's here.. let's see whom be the victor>>


(3) Punchlines {TIE}
(3) Personals {In}
(2) Multies {In}
(1) Flow- {DA}
(1) Structure {TIE}
(1) Vocab/Complex {IN}
(1) Other N/A


Overall- Innovation i felt both though could of came better with the punches, even though Devil's wasn't solid they were still pun attempts reason i scored it a TIE.. Devil you mainly came more with flow no sting in em' though bro. Personals is what won it for Innovation on this battle.

[Slim's Shady]

Well, this was a one-sided battle

(3) Punchlines - In.
(3) Personals - In
(2) Multies - In
(1) Flow- Tie
(1) Structure - DA
(1) Vocab/Complex - In

You both could have had better punches. DA you have to work on your multis and your vocab. In you just have to make your lines a little shorter.

My vote goes to Innovation

[MikeNUFC]

(3) Punchlines - Innovation
(3) Personals - Innovation
(2) Multies - Innovation
(1) Flow- DA (neither flows were that good)
(1) Structure - Tie
(1) Vocab/Complex - Innovation

[Almostlity]

Before i even opened this thread i knew that DA would use phrase 'u mad'.

my vote goes to Innovation

[Sam.]

Before i even opened this thread i knew that DA would use phrase 'u mad'.

my vote goes to Innovation

LOL

[Innovation]

Thanks for the votes guys.

[Devil'sAdvocate]

congrats man.

[slimsoxshady]

Innovation was more innovative so thats who i vote for

[Audi]

Innovation's explanations were longer than his drop. WTF

[Innovation]

Innovation's explanations were longer than his drop. WTF

Sorry for the long explanations, just before people cast their votes, I want them to know exactly what I was thinking.

Wanted to make sure voters knew exactly what I was referencing. But yeah, it turned out to be quite a read lol.