Read the motherfucking rules here: viewtopic.php?f=26&t=108622mceddie wrote:
now i aint seen your verse, but imma guess its some stupid shit
something like OH ITS MCeddie, ill have fries with that, and youll think thats a hit
sayin oh, hey MCeddie, bro, give me a burger and write me the check
not realizin the true irony behind your name is that youre truly a wreck
when i acquaint my self you try to restraint from constraintin a complaint
my lines make you faint, before i even put on my war paint, im no saint
never promised id go easy, like your mom when she tries to convince that she is sober
more irony, your name rhymes with your moms look a like, the famous disney ogre
Oh, look at mceddie using your mom jokes, what low blows
even more irony, thats what your momma gave me, just ask her, she knows
i aint tryin to sound rude or something towards you
but soon youll discover MCeddie aint a fucking drive- thru
Itll take a lot more to beat me than just lines you thought were clever
losing to me because you thought your lines were an endeavor
and even if my first 3 lines were wrong about your verse
you probably thought it at sometime, so emotionally itll hurt you worse
Wreckless Music wrote:This guy's eating weed cookies, you're not beating-me-rookie
this bitch is obsessed with me like I'll be Vinny, he can be Snooki
What does this lady want? Just like his avy, he can stay-in-the-trunk
I make beautiful music, while he just makes it as whack, gay-shit-to-bump
As far as battling goes, you should pass like Pepe Le Pew
facing me in the first round, he's fucked like, ready-to-screw
fucked like a broken condom, you should pass like- if the guard's open, spot em
He's already "Lost" like the ABC show, he's lost like ADD, bro, now he's done like a broken bottle
I'm gonna rip this cunt to shreads, you made the wrong move like a game of drunken chess
like Britney Spears you're a fuckin-mess, you messed with a guy that no-one-can-test
I'm gonna erase this G, I'll let him smell the loss, he can taste defeat
Like a depressed midget you need a booster, it's time to the raise the seat
You're a cracked junkie, there's my "Pot Fiction" you're whack dawg, I'm not kidding
"This needs to be said"- jock, you're not winning, you're in deep water, on the dock sitting
I'm about to mcshake this druggie, c'mon Corrosion, it's on to the next-bracket
He can test the ratchet, i'm hot shit- yes, I can back it, he's a dick, like flaccid
Wreckless Music wrote:Breaking down the lines
Line 1- He said he made weed cookies one time
Line 3- Yelawolf- Pop The Trunk
Line 13- Pot Fiction was the name of one of his songs.
Line 14- name of one of his songs
and flaccid means stiff/uptight
MCSam wrote:Deadline: 12 march.
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