Lello vs DA,Xcls TRRapBattle (lello wins nikkas mad .)

[Sam.]

don't be surprised, that ahmad wants my heat to rise
he jerks off to mad people, cuz they're like him with no piece of mind
you suck my dick so much, as a result your teeth are white
when they heard i was battling you, they thought it was for a pizza slice
but homie yea i'm fat, but your the one who's kinda slow
man I dunno, I thought It was obvious I'll steal da show
o, and when I was a kid I never wore a hair clip tho!
if you wanna come out the closet, don't, we already know
so, you call me a dickrider, thinkin that will class you king
but bitch you're the master chief of that, no use in arguing!
MAD! NIKKA! SON! WASSCRACKIN B?
only think crackin is you thinkin of battling me!
pretentious being the word u use for what u can't understand
well, then i'm more pretentious than a nikka washing himself with sand
bruh, I'm comin at you harder than a hippo's dick
how you like me now? you disgusting low-life hypocrite?



Explanation:

(2): Everytime he gets in an arguement and loses, he sais he was trolling just to get me/or anyone else mad...
They're like him with no piece of mind: mad people - no piece of mind (mindless), and it's a double meaning
the other meaning being (peace of mind), insecure, scared....

(3): semen

(4): we both fat last time i checked

(5): fat ppl are usually slow (i'm not), but here slow has 2 meanings, the other being slow minded

(7 and 8): viewtopic.php?f=21&t=76857&hilit=girl&start=195 (last post)

(9 and 10): he thinks i follow class all the time, so class you king and class_theking is kind of worldplay
but you're the master chief of that, cause he dickrides master chief too much, even when they disagree, he writes something, then he writes something else in the same post that both agree with, so they don't fight

(11): his vocabulary

(12): he on crack, only way he'd have enough courage to call me out!

(13): he calls everything with big words pretentious... he could be right, too pretentious for mad and nikka

(14): pretentious = something he can't understand as i labeled him in the line above, and no one understands why a dude would wash hismelf with sand... i'm more "pretentious"

(16): he usually dubs me as the hypocrite, while the shit he's hypocritical about is beyond anyone elses... for ex: tech n9ne sucks then going sayin in another thread sickology 101 is a classic, sayin hopsin had the best verse on all 6's and 7's, to later saying B.o.B murked hopsin, then saying B.o.B sucks and is not a rapper etc....



(last line between brackets: not part of the battle, but I envision it after spitting the verse, i'd say these words, and throw the mic on the ground)

You can hop on my dick since you do bandwagons
the damn dude cant get his pants sagging
he a brand fool,his parents,oh the situation is so stagnant
failed in to college twice,face it,it aint happening
didnt start his life phase yet,already a damn has been
Fuck class and mike,you get so passed in the hype
you act like a dumb whore,and look like a damned dike (oh shit)
"WAIT YO HOPSIN JUST TOOK A PISS LET ME POST IT
I DO MY BEST TRYING TO GET ME NOTICED"
"I JUDGE HIP HOP BUT HONESTLY I ADMIT I DONT KNOW SHIT'
'I LOVE YALL AND I TRY TO COMMIT TO THIS NONSENSE'
he pissed,to you his flow is so tight,come on bitch (WHAT?)
yup,these rhymes so fly,you get blinded
haha,just like me when i seen ya hind end (AWHHHHH)
and im done b,dont get so excited,this the last take
drop the soap,listen to your thoughts,checkmate

explanation:
the parts that are in caps and quotations are lello talking

thats pretty much it,i actually had a punchline verse prepped up,but i changed my mind and went personal,kinda didnt focus a lot on rhyming too.

judges:
me
cream
venom

GO !

[Devil'sAdvocate]

no offense,but lello babbled and said some shit that doesnt make sense in his verse

examples:

if you wanna come out the closet, don't, we already know
so, you call me a dickrider, thinkin that will class you king

i get that he means something reffering to class,but WTF?

but bitch you're the master chief of that, no use in arguing!

but MC made you look like a heaux 20 times

well, then i'm more pretentious than a nikka washing himself with sand

i have a better verse tbh

[Sam.]

Let us decide 1st .

[Sam.]

another post and this thread get's locked by tr i'll pm him

[mdemaz]

Sorry Lello..I love you and all, but DA had the win there..
But DA's verse made no sense towards the end really..It's close but DA wins by a photo finish.

Lello had some good punches referring to members here, but some of them didn't make sense really.

To be fair, both verses were pretty decent overall in terms of structure.

[Sam.]

Punchlines (3) = DA had some good one's lello's punches were weak
Personals (3) = lello
Multi's (2) = DA tat's aws
Flow (1) = tie lawls
Structure (1) = my nikka takes it .
Vocab/Complex (1) = n/a
Other (1) = da had some lawl worthy lines so da


Lello vs DA
3-7

da .

[Sam.]

Punchlines (3) = DA had some good one's lello's punches were weak
Personals (3) = lello
Multi's (2) = DA tat's aws
Flow (1) = tie lawls
Structure (1) = my nikka takes it .
Vocab/Complex (1) = n/a
Other (1) = da had some lawl worthy lines so da


Lello vs DA
3-7

da .

appreciate the feed bruh!, so it's 1-1 now, or non-judges votes also count?

see the op *flowers

[Sam.]

aight, so Venom is gonna end this

yup the punchline dude

[BILI]

Not as impressive as it should be since you guys had like 20 days for this.

That whatscracking b bar is my fav

[Suicide]

The way this was hyped I was expecting something legendary. Both verses were pretty good, but should've been better. I mean ya'll had a couple weeks to prepare. I know my vote don't count.

But, IMO I think DA takes this easily.

[VenomBlackViper]

Punchlines (3) = Lello, pizza slice made me lol.
Personals (3) = Tie, both brought an equal level of personal shit imo.
Multi's (2) = DA, had alot more internals & shit as well, although happening & stagnant don't rhyme.
Flow (1) = Lello, reminded me of Hopsin, even had other signs of Hopsin with using his multi/punchline style & saying "How you like me now", had a hard time keeping up with DA's flow
Structure (1) = Lello
Vocab/Complex (1) = DA
Other (1) = Lello, just felt his verse was better overall

6-4 Lello

There was no hype for me, never seen either of them rap before. Just signed up to judge for the fuck of it. Decent battle.

[Sam.]

2-1 lello wins .

[Devil'sAdvocate]

wait a fuckin minute yo

what abt demaz and suicide? just cuz they didnt break down they votes lol

plus second of all

the whole system is FUNNY AS FUCK!

how can punchlines get more points than rhyming?

thank god i didnt focus on rhyming more than i did,would have been a waste of time

second of all,this really seemed very ignorant out of cream and VBV

the idea of me having a very sarcastic way of dissing him by having him diss himself is magnificent,again nobody mentioned that its also kinda new

my verse really flowed better too

third of all,i had 2 punchlines the entire verse,if yall took the time to read my little ass explanation,i had a punchline verse,but i decided to go with this one,i wrote like 3 verses,i write on my bb whenever i find time and one of these 3 was the one i was gonna go with and it was all punchlines.

the 2 punches i had

you can jump on my dick since you do bandwagons

jump on a bandwagon/jump on my dick therefore i refer to my dick as a bandwagon

nothing complex but it gets the point across and sticks its stone

the blinded/hind end punchlines

a very funny cheeky sarcastic way of telling him how fat he is,better than all of his rehashed punchlines that i have seen before.

my personals were real personal

lol @ cream saying he said some stuff he didnt knew before

did you know about lello's college situation or abt how his parents still treat him like a 4 year old

while lello

he called me slow

he claimed i dick ride MC,by his logic i also dickride menzo,VBV,CREAM,satire and some more

plus MC exactly,our taste in rappers is almost the same but we differ alot in opinions (i can list them if yall want)

wait so he called me pretentious,holy MOSES!

a fallacy yall thrown at me because i used this word against 3 of your beloved artists:

bis
RA
sadistik

which i really believe all are pretentious,i dont throw the word pretentious at everything,thats a big exaggeration

i consider this to be lello ethered

"WAIT YO HOPSIN JUST TOOK A PISS LET ME POST IT
I DO MY BEST TRYING TO GET ME NOTICED"
"I JUDGE HIP HOP BUT HONESTLY I ADMIT I DONT KNOW SHIT'
'I LOVE YALL AND I TRY TO COMMIT TO THIS NONSENSE'

oh and punches and multi should be equal and dont judge punches since i had simple obvious punches better than his.

plus lello took time to write an explanation bigger than both our verses,a biased explanation with further pathetic attempts at insulting me

he thought using the words im kinda known for "MAD! NIKKA! SON! WASSCRACKIN B?" is smart

and yall dumb fucks thought so too

the punchline verse i had had something similar to this too,lello uses the words poppy,terrible,horrible,horrid and some more,i had a punch for each and every one

total bull shit

i will ask demaz and suicide via PM for them to break down they votes,because i should have won this.

[Sam.]

re match

[BILI]

U MAD WIKKA?