by Block » Sep 1st, '06, 05:07
both were simplistic, but...
BAR:
mcbyde back again fucking wid me,
you need to learn you wont beat me ,
doesn't rhyme.. at all.. lol
coz my style better than yours,
simple as that, mine makes ppl stop and think ,
yours topple ppl over the edge, takes them to the brink,
you coulda done alot better wit that concept if you put some multis and built it up. least it rhymes tho.. lol
and i mean the brink of death, topping thereselve when they hear you shit,
one guy heard it and ran so fast he choked on his own spit ,
and when you spit, your mouth looks like a 80 year old clit,
umm kinda lame concept.. again, least it rhymes. looks like you tried ta set it up to be a nice punch too, so A for effort lol
and your words smell worse, than an out of date hurse.
gonni end this quick, coz we all know you shit ,
umm.. kinda funny i guess, lol.
a dont need to prove it again , you a chicken , get back in yer pen ,
get back to your farm , you owner gonni pull an egg out,
then ill by your ass at a check out, time for you to get out,
basic rhymes, but eh..
get out this game before you get tamed,
coz your raps are like a transexual , Just lame ,
now mcbryde dont cry , coz you just got layed down , Bye-Bye
coulda had a better finisher. you should open up with your best line and finish with the next best, or suttin that hits real hard. you dont seem like a battler tho, but keep elevatin ya shit fam
MC
so you think yoo a rapper becouse you no the wurd hook
all your fuckin songs are text book
stop braggin you got your deal by a flook
a just need to dump you in the water then frow you a fish hook
you must be mad a been rappin about a week an you are getin overtook
i naw mine are better but these ppl can have a look
wayyyy too many rhymes with one concept "look, hook, flook, overtook
im allredy beeter an i just began
stop layin to thes ppl you aint a man
yous a wrinkly old gran
sitten in an old rokin chair with an empty beer can
a knok you off that chair with any hand
your not a rapper you shoud join a rock band
when yoo have listend to all my shit your wrist would have been tanned
i no my name is startin to expand
wen im dun yool need to burry you head in the sand
well thats what i demand an thats what i had planed
and again... ya rhymed with the same concept.
keep elevatin tho.
overall i'd say bar. good battle i guess.
For $5...