Tourny Round 2-Inches2010 vs Marth (CLOSED)

by **C-Game** » Oct 26th, '06, 21:20

6 BARS == 12 Lines
FIRST TO GET 4 VOTES WIN
3-0 KNOCK OUT
ELLIGIBLE VOTERS ARE
NEUTRAL VOTERS WITH 30 + POSTS
TOURNAMENT PARTICIPANTS WHO ARE IN DIFFERENT GROUPS
e.g --group A contestents cant vote on battles which consist members in there group

MUST VOTE ON THESE CATEGORIES ADD NEW CATEGORIES IF U WANT

Flow
Punches
Wordplay
Multies
Humour
Other

example
Flow - eminem
Punches - eminem
wordplay - 50
............

Winner - eminem

inches DROPS FIRST

by **Inches** » Oct 29th, '06, 00:25

you think just cause you made it to round two your fine?
you only won last time cause thomas only dropped nine!
and speakin of nines, feel the one in my waist,
drop a weak 6 bars, and feel it in ya face
opps sorry, did i scare ya outta your town?
cause your pants is starting to smell, and there a shade of brown
and thats how other rappers can tell when your around!
but please bury your lyrics so they're lost and never found
this is simple rhyming here, but victorys coming near,
i spit these 12, and losing just aint my fear,
we battled twice, and im preppin for my second win,
hurry the votes up, i want round three to begin

by **Marth** » Oct 29th, '06, 10:15

yowh here is mine one

im battlin inches in round two the renowned pervet-with-a-penman your flow ,humour and worldplay aint perfect-its-a-shame ur nervous-and-ur-lame man tell me wats the verdict-that-u-claim
While you batle, I feel girls-up-in-the-rain ur so worthless-whos-to-blame

let's talk about distance for instance
I'm beating you to death, you aint'showing resistance
You're scared to drop first
talking about dropping, i drop longer then Fred durst

Long dropping, you know nothing about length or long
If i ask where you're from, you only know to say NO CONDOM < NO CONDOM
I figured out what ya got< HIV
You got an one inch big dick we can't even see

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Oct 29th, '06, 13:18

Marths

im battlin inches in round two the renowned pervet-with-a-pen
man your flow ,humour and worldplay aint perfect-its-a-shame
ur nervous-and-ur-lame man tell me wats the verdict-that-u-claim
While you batle, I feel girls-up-in-the-rain ur so worthless-whos-to-blame

weird punches not good punches if you will , you big up yourself more some lines confused me multis are good

let's talk about distance for instance
I'm beating you to death, you aint'showing resistance
You're scared to drop first
talking about dropping, i drop longer then Fred durst

you stole the comparison ive heard it before , he did drop first so what you talking about

Long dropping, you know nothing about length or long
If i ask where you're from, you only know to say NO CONDOM < NO CONDOM
I figured out what ya got< HIV
You got an one inch big dick we can't even see

has nice build up but not feeling it at all

Inches

you think just cause you made it to round two your fine?
you only won last time cause thomas only dropped nine!

nice punchline and keeping it personel

and speakin of nines, feel the one in my waist,
drop a weak 6 bars, and feel it in ya face

nice rythming no punch makes perfect sense though

opps sorry, did i scare ya outta your town?
cause your pants is starting to smell, and there a shade of brown

great humor nice rythm flowing nicely

and thats how other rappers can tell when your around!
but please bury your lyrics so they're lost and never found

nice rythming nice concept nice punch

this is simple rhyming here, but victorys coming near,
i spit these 12, and losing just aint my fear,

nice rythming thats about it though

we battled twice, and im preppin for my second win,
hurry the votes up, i want round three to begin

nice ending not realy punching or anything nice rythms though and good personel

there i break down perfect , my vote : inches

by **Marth** » Oct 29th, '06, 13:19

I don't have to batle inches to know for who ya gonna vote

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Oct 29th, '06, 13:22

Marth wrote:I don't have to batle inches to know for who ya gonna vote

if you shit makes sense and you hit personels and put in even a little humor maybe ill vote for you

by **C-Game** » Oct 29th, '06, 18:21

keep em votes comin

by **Marth** » Oct 29th, '06, 19:01

Bump vooootes

by **Inches** » Oct 30th, '06, 03:21

allright 1 - 0 me
nice spit marth

by **C-Game** » Oct 30th, '06, 16:53

keep em votes comin
VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE!!!!!!!!

by **C-Game** » Oct 30th, '06, 20:21

Bumpy bump
vote

by **stevethetruth** » Oct 30th, '06, 20:34

Flow inches
Punches inches
Wordplay marth(but made no sense really)
Multies marth
Humour ehh both

overall i liked inches beter it made more sense and had better structure